Darn. It's a real shame that this is only a oneshot. I'd love for it to keep turning into a story featuring Annabeth and Percy dating, Olivia struggling to accept Annabeth as a mother, Annabeth dealing with her feelings about her family, and Rachel thinking about her decision to go to Paris.

I actually kinda like Olivia since she just so adorable you can't mad much on her. Also I know how horrible kids could be from where I came from they are a bunch of little shit devils for no reason at all( knew how to curse when they're 5, I swear they adapting).

is this a oneshot or?

asdfghjklkjhg thank you so much for writing this!
this is so cute and i looooove your writing style.
if you're up to it, please write more! i really want to see where this goes.
much love 333

Oh, my gosh! This is so cute, and I adored your writing style. The plot was very well, uhm... plotted, (excuse my wording xD), and you have a way with keeping characters true to themselves. I very much liked this story, and I hope I'm not being too intrusive or pushy, but will there be a second chapter? Or, perhaps, another story that continues this one's plot? I realize this was published like two years ago, I'm probably grasping at straws by asking about sequels or more chapters. I'm sorry! I just love your writing style, and even though there's not a second chapter, you open-ended it, so at least my imagination can run free. :) Thank you for writing this, it was absolutely beautifully well-done! I'll definitely be looking for more stories from you on your profile.

You really are the Princess of Oneshots... but please can you make this a two shot..?

I read this whole mcfudgin thing that you posted nearly two years ago expecting a oneshot with a sweet ending and I get a CLIFFHANGER!
Obviously you aren't posting a second chapter to this!
OH THE HUMANITY! Why!? Why must all good things never be finished?! Why are all the good authors bad at completion?!
Why must this go incomplete?!
Is it even worth following?! WILL IT EVER HAVE PERCABETH?!
WILL it?!
Well I'm not logged in anyways. If your going to complete this I'd really appreciate it. It's entrancing and gripping at the same time. Your mix of description and emotion balances it perfectly. If you do happen to finish this masterpiece, could you PM me?
I'm Average Canadian.

I really hope than one day, you will publish the next chapter...

Aww cmon you end it right there? It was just getting great

love the story. love the characters. and love Olivia. please do a sequel or continue the story.

Is this the end? Say it ain't so! There has to be more! This story is too great to just leave here!

Thus was great. I hope you can continue this because I really want to see how this ends...

...Are you going to finish it?...Cause I really want you to finish it...

shshdsdssafdk I know you're the OneshotPrincess but please don't make it a oneshot :

I WAS FUCKING HOOKED! AND IT ENDED! AFTER SEEING THE PUBLISHED DATE, AND NO UPDATES. THIS REVIEW DESERVES CAPS.