Doctor: "Something they've called magic. No, not real magic so you can stop looking so excited. I think it must be an illness or a codename or something like that."
Me: *snorts* As if!

Well if you ever do come back, I'll be here :). It was a fantastic pair of chapters!

Totally understand. Good luck on writing your other story! :)

Nice job. Is this earlier when Rory had only recently joined the Docyor and Amy or after one of the times Rory died?

I personally feel that you wrote the Doctor perfectly.

I wish that you would coninue this amazing fanfiction but I understand I started thinking of what the next chapter would be about and expect it to be amazing if you decide to continue this fanfiction

please update I love it

Please update fast it's so cool

This seems really interesting! I hope that you'll update soon!

I realy want this to continue and i can't wait to see how it turns out.

This is interesting hope it continues :)