Good stuff so far. I hope your search for a beta turns out well - your technical skill, while not bad, could definitely use some improvement to keep up with your other, more impressive writing abilities. I look forward to more of this to come.

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Training filler, followed by nonsensical 'prophecy' foreshadowing. What a comeback for a story!

Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon.

I'm getting some Kronos vibes from harry here. Fighting dirty and using any means necessary to get the job done.

Like born in a family where your siblings has their own specialties, he has to do whatever to make himself stand out

Glad to see you back. The story is better than I remember, keep it up

Thank you for the new chapter of this story and I hope you are doing well.

I’ll admit this story impressed me, the pace, the characters, and the development is well done and makes me look forward to the next chapter. I’m rooting for you keep it up!

Great to have you back! You should consider making a discord for your stories. Can't wait for the next chapter!

Ohhhh CC coming out to play hopefully she is in harem

Nice

Nice

Terrible

Really glad to see you writing again. Looking forward to more of this story. And I don't think anyone minds about you not writing training montages. It gives a bit more excitement when you reveal his progress in a fight or something like that.

Can't wait for the family drama to resolve itself and I'm liking the Shirley aspect too.

Keep up the great work, Mantis!

Interesting stuff looking forward to more

Brilliant so far. Loving every work. Keep up the good work