A fab fic! Maria sure outsmarted Georg here. I don't know about baking bread, but Maria might have a bun in the oven now. Lols

Love, love, love. Sexy, playful funny. I just love the way you write our favourite couple. It's just gorgeous. Great teasing about his age and his very apt response.

Hot and funny! That "liniment" line was too good!

Seducing each other. Cute.

I knead much more tsom fanfiction from you. LOL Hope you don't mind my little joke there. Nice work.

GREAT writing - witty and sexy. Capt vT trying to steal the bread, then seducing Maria is a triumph. Love the 'Are you certain I shouldn't run for the liniment?' line. She's got his number - BRILLIANT.

Brilliant! I love the way you write these two together

oh this was hot and filled with humor too... loved it... very sweet story...

so cute! and so hot, too ;)

heeeeeee! how delicious and i ain't talkin' bread. i love maria's relentless teasing, LOVE his "it will be YOUR pleasure..." haha! i love the hot stuff when it's fun. hope you write lots more. love your stories.

Another amazing job! I knew it was going to be good the minute we encountered unbuttoned sleeves rolled up Georg out to cause mischief (and I don't mean stealing bread). Your writing is so vivid, I loved the way you captured the way he sees her: innocent and brazen, someone who makes his heart ache and his body tighten. PERFECT! Maria bests him, of course (I cackled at the liniment line, and "old man," these are funny because of course he has just proven himself to be quite robust, even as he slithers to the floor in a dignified way) but then he kind of bests her too. She is always in a hurry and he is always trying (though rarely succeeding) to draw things out. I loved everything about this story: hot, funny, steamy, sweet. You are an amazing writer!

That was totally worth the burnt bread!

Hot and hilarious! I loved it, I hope you write more stories! Where are these prompts coming from?

Something burning, indeed. Enough heat in that kitchen to bake everything not in the icebox. Love the comments:
"I can't think when you do that"-who could?
"It will be your pleasure"-if you insist
"Don't want to wait"-hot
"I want to hear you"-hotter
Brava.

"Do you smell something burning?" Indeed! Well... Derrr... That was so super hot (and I'm NOT talking about the bread!) I mean I loved the original that you posted on ProBoards but this was this was something else! Fun, sexy, delicious (again, NOT talking about the bread!) such a good hot little one shot! Great work!