Excellent job. I like how the ending is open ended, and that there's room for our imagination. However, should you write the trip, I would absolutely read it. Happy writing!

Awesome first chapter, I can't wait to read more!

Chanting 'Sequel' in my head because this story was so good. So many ways this could go, so many possibilities! I'd be a bit sad if you did write a sequel and they didn't end up together BUT I would still read it and enjoy the f**k out of it along the way :P Very nice piece you got here.

P.S. Fang is more than smooth to get Lightning in bed on the first night as a couple.

What?! No.. That can't be the end.. There so much more that can be done.. And please do write their trip.. I want to see lightning learning to express herself and grow out of her shell.. Anyway thanks for updating.. I pumped my fist up when they kissed.. Please do write a sequel

I thought it was great. I would love another chapter of the trip from lightning's point of view. I also enjoy more of this both a continuation of this chapter and more like it. I enjoyed every second of reading it, from the good moments, when they got along, to the bad when which would be when they didn't.

For the trip, that can definitely be a one or two shot sequel to the tale, especially if you put it in the POV of Lightning or Fang. I love this tale and how it turned out in the end.

Definitely interested in more, I think you handle fang and light's characters very well. The others too, even with the little screen time they had. This is the first fanfic that's been able to keep my interest in awhile, not sure what exactly did it. But you did it, so thank you for that, I hope you do more with them.

Omg yyeessss plssss add more. You could do like little one shot things from here, if you don't want add to the direct story. This story was so cute.

Love the newest chapter and I think it would be interesting to see everything from Lightning's perspective for a bit. Ugh she can be so frustrating but cute. Keep up the great work!

Please, I need more.
This story is so sweet and well developed. Characters are in character and the pace is perfect.
A wonderful story so far and I can't wait to read more, please, please keep writing this.

Lmao! It's like the romantic scene just flew by.. But I love how you did the whole interaction but I'm kinda frustrated.. I wish there was more

oh damn! One step forward two steps back. Can't wait to read next

God that so heart warming! I'm so happ how it ended haha too adorable. Love fang and lightning

Yess! Progress! I can't wait to read the next chapter! I find it funny how fang can't see she's already under light's skin

Lmao light! Give fang a break lol haha but it's funny to see fang trying so much