Haruta is a guy! Why do so many people say he's female?! I mean, between Izu and Haruta, I would think people would think Izu is s female. If you're not sure, check out the one piece wiki. That will prove it.

I want to know why they shouldn't be judge by there parents mistakes

You have no idea how pissed I am

Kill the snazlel guy whatever his name was

The guy that stabbed whitebeard by betraying them after getting tricked by the marines that whitebeard was ganna trade then in for ace

Kill the guy with a similar name

He has the anme Teach
Hes a D

:)

And nobody likes him so it's perfect!

Thatch, sachi and penguin and my fav characters ever lmao

good luck~

no ace! poor thing. they need to be recsued. don't stop

good fanfic. If you continue it or if someone else continues it, please pm me.

Haruta is actually a guy

;-; no pls. Can u atleast tell us how u were planning to end it and what thatch did to izo? (I have a guess but I wanna hear it from u)

I love this story, I know it's been aw while since your last update but I truly hope that you will continue to write chapters for this story. I love that Luffy and Ace are traveling with the Whitebeard pirates. I hope that Whitebeard and the crew find them soon not only so they can be saved, but so that Luffy and Ace can let Whitebeard and the rest of the commanders know that Teach aka Blackbeard is a traitor and needs to be dealt with. If they could snuff Teach out before he can do any real damage to the crew I'd really appreciate that.

Also I'm curious as to how Marco, Thatch and the rest of the commanders will react once they see all the injuries the boys gained while on the slaver ship. I'm sure they'd be pissed and kill every slaver there. So then having them learn that Teach is a traitor and in cahoots with these slavers I just can't see Teach getting away unharmed (not that I'm complaining I HATE Teach).

Just a random thought, but since the boys are on a ship now you could have the Whitebeard pirates call in a favor and ask Shanks and his crew to help find the boys. I can only imagine how Shanks would react should he learn that Luffy and Ace were kidnapped by slavers and have been missing for days lol

Anyway like I said in the beginning I love this story and I really am looking forward to the next update lol I want you to know that I appreciate all the hard work, time and dedication you have put into creating and developing this story. I know how hard it is to write something like this and I know that it takes time and patience to create each new chapter. I just want you to know that I really appreciate all that you've done to make this story as incredible and enjoyable as it has been for me so far lol
THANK YOU SO MUCH! :)

PLEASE UPDATE SOON, THIS STORY IS SIMPLY TO AMAZING TO BE LEFT UNFINISHED, I SIMPLY MUST KNOW WHAT'S GOING TO HAPPEN NEXT AND SO ON UNTIL THE VERY LAST CHAPTER!
I WOULD TRULY BE UPSET IF THIS STORY WAS LEFT UNFINISHED WHEN I AM SO COMPLETELY ADDICTED TO IT AND REALLY WISH TO READ MORE LOL

You better continue.. Or i'll cry!

Aww thank you for maeking this story great though
I was gonna ask if you can continue but if you have atuff going on than i respect that

Thank you for this story though

aw this was so good i wanted to see luffy meet shirahoshi

Moooooorrrrreeee! Please continue this story because it is really good!