A creepily beautiful piece.

cool

firstly, i loved how this is from an unknown person's point of view. secondly, i loved how you put everything into pieces, the right amounts of angsty feelings and event descriptions - all mingled nicely. but, only one thing, i think i would've liked it in a prosy format. i usually like poems, but i think i mostly like them in my mother tongue. perhaps, i couldn't appreciate the poetic format of this piece because English is not my mother tongue, it is a plausible explanations. just wanted to let u know that i PERSONALLY would've liked it better as a prose. but, overall, greatly done. :)