Just read through all of this in one sitting, good fun! I always liked Priscilla and felt bad for her, so I'm glad we got to her bit.

Wouldn't finding a campfire be better?

wow, how much did the game derail the plot? I mean the last ending with the dlcs and the painting is quite the feels.

jolly good cooperation !

This really is a great story, with a lot of thought put into every character. (Almost) Everyone has their time to shine and develop in some way and bonding in a world once devoid of hope touches my heart.

Read this whole thing basically in a day, you should be proud of what you've written. Loved your characterizations and the realistic pressure of having future sight. Will read as long as you write.

I will admit the beginning of your story did not land with me - HOWEVER, once the main character started taking things more seriously I was hooked.
I love the characters and I love the lore.
Please keep writing I am greatly enjoying this. If you ever feel like you are going to abandon it please add one last chapter explaining what you wanted to happen, even if its only in dot points.

slowly inching towards the end, and I'm not ready for it

read through the whole story and saving myself the time to hold off the reviews until now. great story here and enjoyed how it turned out. can't wait to see how this'll turn out before you possibly decide to get into the game sequels

Lovely chapter as always, but it felt somewhat... weird, somewhat-not-your-style sort of a deal and it clicked when I read the A/N saying stuff happened. I hope you're hanging in there in any sort of situation you're finding yourself in right now, and I truly wish you the best :)

Keep on being awesome and stay safe

this has been and will be a great story

enjoying story! thanks!

Well. That happened. So I'm looking forward to seeing how this all plays out. See ya next chapter!

Great chapter as usual! Sad we don't see Priscilla leave with Garret but I can understand why you wrote it that way. Can't wait for the next update!

Mr. Let's Do That Again! Okay, wait, let me actually do that again...

Ahem!

Mr. LDTA! Welcome back!

Firstly, I liked the title of this chapter, I really suits it wellgiven the rowing boat of emotions about to gush forth.

Secondly, please do forgive me. I know I promised to write reviews for the other 40 chapters of this fic but, unfortunately, I've only commented on 8 (maybe 7) we far. Things have been rough, but I WILL do my best to keep my promise. I'm just too devoted to this story to make a liar of myself.

anyways, on to ze review!

I had been waiting for this chapter for so very LONG! And! I am over the MOON because you delivered waaayyy above what I was expecting. Bloody well done, you are, as I will again state, brilliant.

the jolly cooperation showed by the trio was something to really love. With Garrett's (might have spelt that wrongability' of premonition, Tarkus' chattery bruteness and Solaire's bubbly-ness; the chemistry was nostalgic of those days when people used to get together and, well, you know, raid a dungeon together on separate PSP's or collectively speed-run RE 2 on a warm Saturday. The eased conversation between Tarkus and the Sun Knight was also something to feel pleasant about, it's not everyday you get a talkative knight that should by all rights be dead (in canon, that is) sharing words of his family's wisdom with a like minded shard of the Nameless King.

However, I must say that when I read about Solaire gazing intently at Priscilla's doll, my heart wanted to leap out of my chest. And when he mentioned that it felt vaguely familiar to him I wanted to scream out to the Heavens. The feels just slapped me like a mother disciplining her son for poking his hand into the cookie jar. The palpitations have yet to abate, by the way. Thank you for that.

Ah, vertical movement! I honestly had not thought about that at all. Trust Garret (did I get it right this time?) to be so unpredictable.

I actually enjoyed the persona you have Jeremiah. In-Game, he kinda seems like the type of person to be that self-centered (perhaps because he appears as a phantom dressed in black and yellow with a medieval BDSM whip?) and cold-hearted. Although I wanted to take his crown and shove it down his pie-hole, that type of attitude is a possibly better method to sway our favourite cross breed into leaving her prison... home... you get what I'm saying. You know, I had actually forgotten that his aim was Oolacilean sorcery's. Thank you for reminding me.

Oh, my heart broke when Solaire said he was staying! And then it broke even more when Garret (I'm sure this is the correct spelling) was heart-broken AND also hit with the feels over such a move!

"Just because one can be alone doesn't mean that they should be." That statement broke me into a million pieces, mate. No, bugger that, it broke everyone reading who understood the pure MEANING of that situation. You are both cruel as you are a genius. I can't even be mad at you because I'm so overcome with emotion. And my damn eyes won't stop leaking with this warm liquid called feelings! You warmed my cold heart with such a setting and broke with your hammer of literacy! But bloody hell, was that spectacular!

If I loved Tarkus before, I want him to be the best man at my wedding right after seeing him comfort Garret (yes, I got it right!). After all, who WOULDN'T be that stunned after having basically your best friend, your brother, suddenly leave your side? You just hit the jackpot with that part of the chapter. Somebody give this man a Bell's!

As for Havel and Gwyndolin... bah! I can sympathize that they don't trust someone would could potentially kill all divinity with a single swipe of their blade but this intense discrimination makes me rage for the smidge of aggressiveness in my head to get up, turn on my game and kill them both just because I can't handle the hate-speech directed to my darling, Priscilla.

Honestly, I would have expected such a response from Havel, he was so deep in Gwyn's behind, his helm would have gotten swallowed by the Sunlight God's butt-cheeks but Gwyndolin?! I suppose even the ignored member of the family has an ignoble Titanite pole up his rear.

I don't even blame Garret for being pissed off. Props to both you and him for that comeback line about the 'glorious' sun in the sky. Bloody gods are the worst hypocrites...

but enough of my anger at those two. Bloody brilliant job. The only thing I'll mention was that there were a few more grammatical errors than usual, but since I'm no better when it comes to publishing perfect chapters myself, don't even pay that sentence any time. You did mention that things were up with your life so I completely understand. I don't really care about a writer's mistakes in a chapter when the story is so good, it's golden.

sorry if this is a long review, I am really devoted to this story. Thank you for always doing your best to publish new chapters even during your undoubtedly stained schedule.