Reviews for Lory's Majestic Error
zekses chapter 3 . 8/30/2017
Why am I reading this? Why have you written this?
Assassel chapter 2 . 5/2/2016
Lelz. They're in big trouble. How about adding an epilogue on a possible cover-up to that fiasco? They do have to save Kyouko's reputation.
Annabella Prinx chapter 3 . 7/21/2015
LOVED IT!
claraowl chapter 3 . 6/29/2015
That was amusing. I enjoyed it!
heidi76 chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
Thanks, that was an interesting read and how Ren protected Kyoko sounded too adorable (though in real life, I'd been put off if I was Ren's fan because I wouldn't believe anything so innocent these days)
The last part, though amusing, sounded a bit too frank to be captured by the media. Lory directly claiming that he was guilty and Ren outwardly admitting 'strong affections' for Kyoko to the media just seems either going too far or too early at this point of SB universe.
Guest chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
It was pretty good as pre fluff loved it so sweet
queennicolee chapter 1 . 6/29/2015
This was really fun to read. Thank you so much for writing this! -
Blushweaver chapter 3 . 6/27/2015
Thanks for writing an afterward. This was a fun one to read! Especially Ren's reaction to being woken up in the previous chapter. haha! Brilliant idea.
mutemuia chapter 3 . 6/26/2015
And this 'currently' he said should made her blushing endlessly :)
claraowl chapter 2 . 6/26/2015
That was fun!
herpaderpproductions chapter 1 . 6/16/2015
As requested, a sequel/epilogue/spinoff or something is coming. I can't guarantee anything until August because I am currently swamped, but you will see it heading your way eventually.
Kumioko chapter 2 . 6/15/2015
I really liked this idea! Hope you would write more but I understand why u don't want to continue. I would like a sequel to this. How media reacted and stuff like that :)
Guest chapter 2 . 6/12/2015
This story should continue its great I'm loving it post more don't end it
Guest chapter 2 . 6/11/2015
I want more its hilarious n cute need more post asap that poor crew haha n yashiro n the president sending his calls to ignore lol n poor Kyoko to wake to that n ren's already made a statement to the media hu like they'll believe that maybe she pregnant thats what they'll believe n he's all he should be because he's taking responsibility for it n seems to love her after all he was talking care of her n they we're holding hand while they slept yes hilarious so I'm a need a bit more the way you write it'll still say we need more so just keep posting
Guest chapter 2 . 6/10/2015
Please! Write an epilogue! D
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