Reviews for Black Diaries
dragons9 chapter 21 . 8/29
This is good...as for pairings...I would like hary/evan to be with luna or daphne and draco/danny to get with either padma or lisa...Neville with Hermione...please dont put harry with Hermione or Ginny...dont like the pairings...to bossy and ginny just dont like that pairing at all...I do hope that he will come to trust Neville...he will be a good friends and he needs help getting past his why I think Hermoine will be good for him...will jarry be able to become an animal...if he does I hope its a grim...will he get his invisibility cloak back from dumbles or will it be in his vault...
nagiten chapter 21 . 8/23
great story there are so few VDXHP stories that actually have harry and arent slash or genderswapped.
and that are more then 4 chapters... hope you are ok
Hugo Cesar Ortiz chapter 21 . 7/25
Continúaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
MikaelsonChicka chapter 21 . 6/19
Please tell me this will continue to be updated! I'm so sad I'm caught up! This is probably one of the best stories I've read in a while and I didn't want it to end!
XanderRoman chapter 21 . 5/22
I know real life is a pain and your a doctor I think and in a pandemic your probably really busy but I hope you keep updating this story because it is on of the better ones I have read in a while and it truly has not even got to the full cross over yet which I believe will be great
cypher chapter 21 . 5/4
creature inheritances: B
Bonnies Animagus Form: B
jgood27 chapter 21 . 1/24
Love this story and cant wait to read more, please update soon
Guest chapter 21 . 1/16
Hello how’s your day going? For me my day is okay but it would be so much better if you updated this story idk if you’ve given this up if you have please post a chapter on here saying it or if you’re even alive
PLPanda chapter 21 . 1/8
oh god. I just imagined Klaus making a move at Caroline and suddenly Evan appears out of nowhere (apparates) and Klaus is surprised
"what do you want, kid? get lost or I will consider you my meal"
"I do not approve of your relationship with my sister. in utterly emotionless voice.
"And what could such brat like you do to me?thisproceeds to throw Klaus around using merlinian magic while at the same time torturing him using Wiccan magic, all while the twins are holding a camera somewhere in the background. Never mess with Bennet-Noire family"
darkpegasuzz chapter 21 . 12/8/2019
Liked your story, keep it up. Do you have a release schedule?
Aqua Lilly chapter 12 . 11/27/2019
In both the Samhein and Yule ritual, you didn't really highlight how the people outside of th Noir family felt about it. You also didn't make the contrast between the two very prominent. The rituals just felt lacking in that regard. It didn't feel monumental when some of the characters performed their first ritual or how the teachers felt about watching it. You only stat that George was disappointed that there was no whirl wind of air when the element was called but never really explained why that disappointed him.
Aqua Lilly chapter 10 . 11/27/2019
I've noticed that you usually only showcase George's POV instead of both of the Twins' POV. Why is that?
Aqua Lilly chapter 4 . 11/27/2019
TBH, I thought the leather jacket was a bit much. He's a kid after all. A dark jean or canvas jacket would probably suit his age, but you do you.
Guest chapter 21 . 11/22/2019
Please update it’s great
NazgulBelserion chapter 20 . 11/17/2019
So got bored and reread this you said spoiler pairing would be witch from the originals everyone thinking Davina but what if it's Freya...Katerina For life
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