this is very good, could you update

I'm loving this story so far, and its take-no-prisoners badass Harry. Thanks for sharing it with us.

Quite amusing

This is the story i'm most disappointed to find unfinished. This is the most promising start of any of your stories so far. A Harry who is not a victim is a treat, and one who is savvy enough to counter the threats and attacks of bullies is even better. Too bad he reverted to type at the conclusion of this episode. Would have been great if he had re-locked the train compartment and found a creative way to give Hermione something with which to occupy her mouth.

Fun concept. Older and more pretentious students institution could allow for a lot of really fun concepts to be explored. Though only 3 chapters I hope you return to this someday.

nice story hope to see you update soon

come back

come back

Unique wsy to tell a tale

Jeez this is really well done I love the story so far. Harry and every other character is really fleshed out and gives a great insight to magical society without info dumping the reader. The foreshadowing is subtle work of art mixed in with Harry's thoughts giving us a real sense of what he is thinking. The fact that Harry does not always win and is prepared or at least accepting of the consequences make him really relatable and believable as a character its really an excellent work of writing. My only personal problem is I want more. Thanks for the read!

This good start with a lot of potential... I hope you can develop it one day.

I hope you get back to this, it looks like it would b be in.

Oh, and it's "revelation," not "revolution."

Good premise, it's a shame that this story is not updated.

how is the Hiatus going?

I love this story's beginnign and hope you come back to it.