Oh this is a very nice story.

That was hilarious.

I think I understand. Wonderful story.

Uh...was this connected the previous three stories?
Excellent as always.
Adding.

Fantastic

This was another lovely read done by your fabulous works. I always think that side character and main villain interaction is the most interesting. So Shego and Ron's budding relationship.

Still though, how it all developed influenced me to get all giddy in some scenes. Like how Ron held Shego's hand for the first time. Then she takes the time to fight him more often. The just when Shego was left in the wind as Drakken fired her. Ron was her target to visit.

I think you matched up with your starting anology to the overall story was clever and sweet at the end. Still though, having to explain this to Kim would seem difficult. Ah well, at least Shego knows what she wants now. Maybe this will influence her to beat Kim finally. But that's just me.

Before I start rambling. I just wanted to say excellent work and have a great day.

Are you making the story or not ...9.5 / 10 you're killing me here

This put a smile on my face.

Great work.

P.S if you ever write another Rongo fic, i would definitely read it.

Ron Ron Ron, when will you learn to lock your doors when doing stuff like that? But as for Kim she did come over unannounced and as a result she saw what she saw so that one is on her not the two lovers.

Excellent one shot for rongo month and hopefully I get to see more.

Another lovely addition. Still don't understand why these are all broken up, though. Isn't there a site rule against that, actually? It would be a real shame if these got deleted for such a trifling reason.

The intro really wasn't confusing, by the way.

When the rest coming? I need more of this.

I'm almost sorry that this is only a one-shot. Nice use of subtle and not so subtle events as things develop between them. And good use of the different definitions of feeling to help illuminate the story as well as show the passage of time. I have a feeling I'll be rereading this from time to time...

MA

If Kim, didn't want to get in line for his attention/affection, then she has nothing to complain about.

Worse case, they can loosen her clothes a bit and say, "Do you remember be a part of the action? Had a bit too much to drink, hey Kim?

Enjoy your writing, cant' wait for more to appear, like magic.

ahhh . . . I'm gonna re read this I'm trying to understand it. anyways awesome Job keep up the great work please! :)

nice story, I like seeing Ron&Shego together, now a couple of possible stupid questions,

1: is this while they're in HS or after HS?

2: will Ron try to get Shego pardoned so they can have a normal relationship without worrying about GJ or anybody else?