| Reviews for Shadow of the Force |
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suziq968 chapter 14 . 7/25 This is fascinating. The changes are enough to keep it interesting and you've done great things with the characters, they aren't all black and white. I like how Marcus and Remus have determined to fight. Maybe Remus could pull Sirius' head out of his ass? I'm sure it Harry does come back to destroy Moldyshorts it will be a temporary stop by but Sirius would really love space. This and her denial are interesting and sad. James and Lily should be publicly flogged and not allowed to further reproduce. Idiots. |
chaoswizard chapter 14 . 6/3 Keep it coming plz it is good |
WhiteEagle1985 chapter 14 . 4/6 A very interesting story here so far! I look forward to reading more of this! |
camp1500 chapter 14 . 2/20 I like this a lot, I could see it going through #4,#5,and #6 and then seeing Harry returning to earth ... do you plan on completing it? |
Cenright chapter 2 . 2/16 By the way, the Lars Moisture Farm has "Moisture Vaporators" not 'evaporators'. They are trying to pull water out of the air and turn it into vapor, not the reverse, and evaporate it. |
turbomagnus chapter 14 . 2/11 Considering who only last chapter accused Marcus of studying 'dark' magic and even in canon has an oft foolish obedience to authority figures, I suspect this universe's version of the trio is about at its end... |
Lord Shiva chapter 1 . 12/24/2019 Yep just reveal all your plans to your neglectful parents whom your apparently don’t love anymore because that’s really smart. |
NazgulBelserion chapter 14 . 12/5/2019 I really like this I even like this dumbles he's not annoying to read about he's an old man who tired that's how's he should be written like how Marcus saw the truth and isn't a brat i find myself cheering for him also I dislike Oola and Leia as girlfriends their very unattractive to me idk why people think Leia is hot ughh Padme was hot Leia was not and Oola I mean ughh lol so many better options out there but ya I really like how Harry's Leaving is made everyone bunker up Remus is finally attacking the wolf Dumbles is hopefully becoming the warrior that defeated Grindelwald the only ones who haven't changed are he's parents but I think they know their just in denial in how much of failures they are |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 1 . 12/4/2019 More like TheSilverRetard. |
emoryjmorrill chapter 14 . 11/20/2019 Nice |
Guest chapter 5 . 11/20/2019 I love that some storm troopers killed his friend family so he decided that from now on they will kill every considering its open season its rare to find mc to be psychopath |
Guest chapter 14 . 10/5/2019 l like it |
BaddieDZ2 chapter 14 . 9/23/2019 Too many stories for you to actually finish anything. What a fucking joke. |
N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117 chapter 9 . 9/9/2019 Harry really should find Earth after all these cut scenes to people he knew otherwise its like a slap in the face for the reader to get all into it then BAM no Earth visit. |
N7SPARTAN-Commander-Jay117 chapter 6 . 9/9/2019 It would be cool if Harry finds Earth. |