Reviews for Captivating Silence
OptimusPrimegirl213 chapter 1 . 5/18/2016
So I was reading a Note saying something about coming to your page so I found some good stories
shelshokd chapter 19 . 3/14/2016
Loooooved it! GREAT, sweet story! I know, endings can be tough, but it was AWESOME! Definitely want more, but I'll settle for the snippets in Delusory. Looking forward to that next update!
TFPBayverseTMNT4Ever chapter 19 . 12/7/2015
Nice chapter so she can finally talk huh?
Xahraxs chapter 19 . 12/7/2015
How is she talking in the latter half of this chapter? She's mute and the font shows her speaking via mouthing words,but then later it's like she can talk.
CrazynSane chapter 19 . 12/7/2015
well, l can't say l'm not enjoying-
WHAT?! You can't mean this is over...wait, are you tying it into DELUSORY? Ok, nevermind, false alarm...
Mikey- Don't do that! You'll give WOLFJADE a heart attack!
Raph- That's not too hard to do...remember your clown mask scare prank? *chuckles*
Me(blushing)- Hey! Clowns are scary...
Donnie- ...and running out of chocolate ice cream was causing you to-
Me- Nooooooo...NOT THE CHOCOLATE ICE CREAM! 'o' QUICK! To the store!
*runs off to store*
Leo- Ummm...what's up with her?
Donnie- Some things are better left a mystery... ; )
TheLadyOfSouls chapter 19 . 12/6/2015
I'm sad that this story is ending. I liked it better than your other one. Delusory was ok, but this one was much better!
ScarlettWhite chapter 19 . 12/6/2015
Get it! Get it Slash! Whoo! xD Loved you're story and can't wait until you start Delusory back up again! So excited to find out what happens next!
Guest chapter 18 . 11/11/2015
So sad this story is ending but good to know they'll pop up in the other. Was kinda expecting it at some point cause of uuuuh S3 final but guess your ending sooner. Gonna be playing "spot the adorable Frances" in the other story XP.

Hmmm don't know how to feel about this lil twist about Anna... On one hand cool she might get powers... On the other, another Aeonian when we already have 4 kids plus a father who is one of the leaders. Guess I'm still bitter from Cat's comment back in chap. 15 and I think they said something similar in Delusory. I know its cause their race have bad experiences with humans and are probably raised as such but that doesn't excuse the similar BS they pull. Their pretty big hipocrites too when THEY also don't respect the bond even though they say its sacred. Heck that means Anna's bro is Aeonian and he's a dick, Nia is straining her bond for no reason and not explaining herself yet, Kayla did the same although she learned her lesson and I think Kayla's dad pretty much lied to her mom until AFTER he bonded her and unknowingly got her pregnant and he's hundreds of years old, doesn't excuse her actions but he isn't innocent either, and Splinter was human and he's the most normal. We're not that different so it was kinda nice to think that Anna, a nice human besides Casey, was also proving them wrong. The guys call out a person for their actions not their blood or origins but the girls have called out a person simply cause "their human". It be nice if someone actually called them out for it. Wow long rant was long XD.
CarnivalGhost chapter 18 . 11/9/2015
Aww.. the end of a story is always so bittersweet. x(
CrazynSane chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
woah...awesome chapter ABERRANTNINJA! Love it! Can't wait for more...will Anna be healed?
Wait, l thought the stories were being tied together...girl, you have a whole lot more focus and patience than me if you can keep track of both these separate stories and yet tie them together...loads of respect here...
l am looking forward to seeing more of DELUSORY though...l am really curious about Leo x Nia...
TFPBayverseTMNT4Ever chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
wow nice chapter. so she's not human then?
ImpartingAbyss chapter 18 . 11/8/2015
Awesome!
Mistress-Zutara chapter 17 . 11/2/2015
I love this story so much.
Guest chapter 17 . 10/26/2015
*tries to quietly sneak in all Metal Gear Solid like with a camera and headset and whispering oooh so quietly into the mic* Ok guys, I am in the den of the beast and slowly working my way closer to the unbeknownst couple. Haven't been spotted yet but still can't get a sighting of the baby- wait!... I saw something wriggle... I see... I see... a shell! I see an adorable little turtle shell! We got ourselves a precious little turtle girl and she has widdle spikes on her shoulders and head! She just yawn and look she just kicked up her tiny little feet... d'aaaaaaaaaw she so precious! Squeeee! *takes a lil snapshot of the adorable family all snuggled up together and unfortunately the click alerts Slash* Oh shi- Slash spotted me! Abort the mission! Abort the mission! Retreat! Retreat! *makes a run for it*

Shenanigans aside yay the baby is born XD! Looks like Raphie is an uncle and since he's an uncle then everyone else is an uncle! Wait! That means Splinter is sorta a "granpda"! D'aaaaaaaw X3! I look forward to everyone's reactions when they see the little bundle of adorableness. And we can't forget the mutianimals either. Gotta congratulate their leader after all X3!
TFPBayverseTMNT4Ever chapter 17 . 10/26/2015
Awwww so cute! That was a good chapter! Slash is so hot in this fanfic! XD
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