Reviews for Positively lethal
Anahia chapter 1 . 10/23/2019
lovely fic!
Cymonie chapter 1 . 9/5/2018
I'm new to this fandom, but this is the first story I've read that's really good. Really. Good. Well-observed, spot-on for the characters. The right balance of humor, longing and deliriousness.

Your English is remarkable-nuanced and lovely, not merely mostly correct. I did spot a few minor SPAG errors and would happily beta for you if you ever need it! :)
Geenee27 chapter 1 . 3/17/2018
Your writing is delightful and playful just like our two detectives . Loved this story , it made me smile a lot. I can just see these thoughts going around in Jack’s head, she does fluster him and it is delicious. And having him so distracted he forgets his car is the best . Bravo.
simplifydefeat chapter 1 . 7/12/2016
Very good story! Hot, but in lovely nonintrusive way :) I really enjoyed it.
Allie chapter 1 . 2/23/2016
Fantastic! The only Murder in Montparnasse fic I've found so far (and a great one too). And your English is first rate.
Aunt Pru chapter 1 . 9/28/2015
I love this story. I must have missed it when you posted it. Thanks for filling in the background.
Firebird9 chapter 1 . 9/4/2015
'He'd seen Constable Collins' shocked face, but just about everything shocked Constable Collins...' That line cracked me up! I loved this whole fic, but that's the line that will stick with me.

That and your comment about the high quality of the writing on this site. It is, indeed, a pleasant and all-to-rare find in the world of fanfiction.
impelo0044yahoo chapter 1 . 8/9/2015
Positively enjoyable! You captured the character's voices as we viewers have come to know and love them.
JS chapter 1 . 7/25/2015
Good story, I like the blurred lines between sleep and reality
JustMeMusing chapter 1 . 7/16/2015
Great little story. Thankyou for sharing!
AllegrasMom chapter 1 . 7/4/2015
Loved it!
Shamashe chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Hi, I thought this was delightful! If English is a second language, you certainly write it well. Congratulations! I loved your comment about the English teachers' catharsis. One of mine used to call it "bleeding on the paper." If you have not seen the 2nd season, you will like it. You are among many who wait and wait for the next season to come out. In America, we want the 3rd season to come on the air. I look forward to reading more of your stories. Can you translate your language using Goole translate? Good luck.
Water-please chapter 1 . 6/23/2015
Beautiful story! Phryne's POV would be interesting to see, too!
Jackphryne4eva chapter 1 . 6/21/2015
I love how Jack keeps second guessing Phryne is real and not his dream.
brightshinyhonest chapter 1 . 6/10/2015
This is so hot! Wonderful story. I couldn't tell that English was not your first language - you wrote beautifully!
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