Reviews for An innocent request
lexandc chapter 16 . 1/12
Love the story, it is a bit short, but it is full of fluff.
Guest chapter 5 . 1/5
Lol. The Kristoff and Olaf bit was pure gold.
Sappho82 chapter 3 . 10/28/2019
Aw Elsa, so sweet!
Sappho82 chapter 2 . 10/28/2019
Lol I love Anna’s sassy little remark at the end
Sappho82 chapter 1 . 10/28/2019
Rereading this and it’s still so good
APonyNamedLuna chapter 16 . 9/4/2019
Loved this story, fantastic. Would read again 10/10 :)
The Writing Crow chapter 9 . 9/3/2019
All they seem to be doing this entire story so far is hurting each other's feelings, ouch
The Writing Crow chapter 2 . 8/17/2019
Perfect! I'll continue reading now! I like how Anna is so carefree like in the movie and poor Elsa worries too much over everything
inspired-by-Dream chapter 16 . 5/21/2019
What I love about this one is what barely anyone else did, people focus on the incest issue, or trouble in the over world, or even things like Kristanna breaking hearts and become elsanna.

Not that those aren't important, and you got some aspect, but those are not essential.

They have so many years of hurt and their upbringing is not a healthy one, they ought to have issues. Mentally, inside their heart, in the deep recess.

And that problem is what truly could be detrimental to any kind of relationship, be it friendship, siblinghood, or romantic love.

The fact that you tackled on that is what this one really stuck to me. Because is important. Incest is actually a historical thing, especially royalty, and Elsa is Queen, and I bet Rapunzel gave her ideas. The over world problem will always be there, we don't need more drama than it is, let them work out one thing at a time. Kristoff is awesome, could be and can be the best of friend or bro, but it would be like Hans all over again, just without the conspiracy and dark planning.

So we came to the actual relationship itself, between Elsa who's isolated herself for so long, that she has no idea how people works or how to interact with people, versus Anna who's ignorant to everything for so long, she's desperate for any sort of people, feeling, LOVE.

(God, I knew both their side, just identify with those two so much at the same time is absurd.)

So when they do mesh together, there are problem, lots of them. Like normal relationship, yet not, because they have so much more expectation due to being sisters. Expecting to know each other, expecting to protect or be protected, expecting to follow, listen, obey, or assume they have each other's best interest, and that last one is the WORST. Expectation and assumption are damaging in any situation, it creates faulty image, a self-made delusion.

Over those parts where they try to figure things out, I just desperately wishing them to have a third party to listen to. And is good they actually do, because if they are even more isolated, I learn from experience it just doesn't work out as well. Communication is important, but changed perspective is even more so.

There are small parts here and there that makes me frown or cringe a bit, and there are places that could be improved. But this work is complete and is of no matter, because I still thoroughly enjoyed it.

So I thank you, this has been a wonderful story.
AngstyCanadianGleek chapter 16 . 9/18/2018
Oooh, a happy ending! I love if, thank you!
Justherefortheride chapter 16 . 1/11/2018
Fantastic. Loved the interlude, with the amazing “being with Hans turns girls lesbian” line.
RachellovesRain chapter 5 . 4/11/2017
hahaha. I read this story last year. but I cant stop laughing when I re-read this chapter. so hilarious! ohhh Olaf :D
Egnarregnar chapter 16 . 4/10/2017
I just found and read through this yesterday and today and wow...the epilogue is beautiful. Thank you for writing this. It is very very lovely.
Baku babe chapter 16 . 4/9/2017
This was so beautiful and sweet, what a wonderful ending to a great fic :) Two years later? More like 4 years later and I'm still not over those two ;)
Concolor44 chapter 16 . 4/8/2017
That was a basically flawless epilogue. Thank you.
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