Reviews for Harry and Hermione become The Potters
Guest chapter 47 . 7/4
Wasn't Snape killed at Gringott's during the invasion?
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24
Also, something to indicate that the scene was changing would be less confusing. Not even line breaks really, some only say ‘scene break.’
Guest chapter 4 . 6/24
Why are the grangers car enchanted by goblins? Also, did you have a beta?
Guest chapter 8 . 6/23
So, I started on chapter 8 without reading the first 7 by accident. I was a bit confused but I realized it before it was too late when I realized I had no idea where they were or where Jane Granger came from.
isabellaevamara chapter 47 . 6/19
Great story. Sucks harry not there for Hermione during birth. Some of the characters attitudes at points seemed worse then Vernon and petunia and made me quite angry. Confused about how they would ask snape about Ginny taking potions classes when previous chapter said he died at gringotts. Hope Hermione and harry can have a good life with the Grangers
isabellaevamara chapter 17 . 6/18
great story so far, but how does he know he's a lord back in chapter 11a, and he proposed to hermione with potter and black family rings, and hermione wrote home about dumbledore trying to take off her engagement ring, but suddenly in chapter 17 harry doesnt know he is lord potter?
The Ghostly Minion chapter 9 . 6/15
Things worked out. The results of those letters is fascinating. So is the insight on how witches views these things. What’s said about Ron is at once funny and true.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 8 . 6/14
Loved this. It went the way that I though it would.

So H&H are doubly engaged. Her parents are only now coming to grips with what that means on the magical side. I’m sure they like it not one bit.

We’ll see where the other shoe drops next chapter.

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 7 . 6/14
A great start on Christmas. I like how they got out of BritIan and having Padfoot there.

The part about the promise vs engagement rings was very interesting. I suspect that once adopted, Harry might come into his own as an adult Potter.

Waiting on an interesting day!

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 6 . 6/14
This is a marked improvement over canon. Kudos to Amelia for getting rid of Umbridge. I love that there won’t be a DA!

I had a hoot that Percy came a cropper against Harry. That prat deserved it in Spades!

The ‘lessons’ with Snape should turn out better assuming they can setup Occlumency barriers first.

Wonderful that H&H will be together over Christmas. Setup on Padfoot’s part?

TGM
The Ghostly Minion chapter 3 . 6/13
I really like how this is developing. H&H are clearly besotted. Sirius intends to be up to no good with the Dursleys and a ‘magical’ mundane ball is in the offing.

This is all good to me!

TGM
MuffinRamsey chapter 47 . 6/10
Such an excellent story! Thank you for this! Definitely going to save and reread it later.
Guest chapter 47 . 6/2
I loved that series! your the best!
Marc the Unruly chapter 47 . 6/3
Excellent story and a great final chapter.

One question, Draco saw Snape's name in the list of killed. Surely Dumbledore must know.
BMS chapter 25 . 5/24
Beating a dead horse, I know but again w/ continuity.
In her letters home Hermione said Harry convinced her it was up to others to self-study and after discovering some were doing that she let the idea drop. So no DA 5th year. Yet Dumbledore mentions it.
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