Yay! Another chapter. Chopper is now gone. I saw that coming. Why does this red mech seem so familiar? You know, he reminds me of Starscream.

Very nice. Was not expecting that.

Wait, WHAT?
I did not see that coming.
This is great. I feel like I have to go back and read the whole thing again now...

Freaking awesome. What more can I say.

And the plot thickens!

I bet you when Chopper says 'energon of a lifetime' he means they won't be having a very long lifetime after their supposed mission.

I am so very concerned for your poor characters who are walking into an obvious trap. Great chapter!

This story is beautiful. Simply magnificent! Your writing is smooth and fluid guiding the reader upon a dangerous and daring adventure. Telling us the fascinating story of a lost soul surviving in a world where everybody is a threat. The way you write the character gives him a different persona than most 'normal' adventure stories, giving this work a totally different feel. It is a unique and beautiful fic and I've fallen in love with the story.

this cliffhanger!

Eh! Your back! That's good. I liked the chapter, very well written.

Ooh, things just got interesting.

All of a sudden I have a bad feeling about this shadow mech. The other three are dead meat but shadow's up to something.

Dangitall I still think his name is hilarious. Awesome chapter, glad the poor guys got a second chance. And there's no way that the end of chopper. Can't wait.

That was close! He's one lucky mech!

Oh wow. Now I gotta know who's gonna win that fight. Wow. I liked that chapter.

Oh joy. Well that took a bit of a darker tone. That one have me shivers. Well done.