Reviews for Wait, There's a Fourth Axis?
Guest chapter 13 . 4/9/2017
Update, pretty please, ive been waiting forever!
goddessofwar1872 chapter 13 . 8/26/2016
(づ )づ update pleasseee I can't wait to see kiki's and the rest of the axis reactions to the hickies.
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thebingefangirl chapter 13 . 7/15/2016
that cliffhanger... it's great but sort of thinking that Kiku will turn into his 2p
carmineautumnmoon chapter 13 . 7/14/2016
Damn did comedy warp into Japan jerking off reaaal quick. But meh, it was still funny.
..."baby batter machine"...
XD So going to use that one day.
And well. Japan has got good hentai for a reason. Ahem. Hehehehehe
Midnightsalem chapter 12 . 5/13/2016
Really? I was the only question? Eh, thanks for putting mine in, loving the story dude!
writersoftheuniverse chapter 12 . 5/13/2016
I'm legit screaming at your last two chapters I'm in love
The Impala has my fez chapter 11 . 5/3/2016
This is amazing! I think Artemis is Aphrodite's 2p. (Just a hunch.)
Also, the torture scene, or whatever someone would call it was wonderfully written! You were able to make it detailed and keep from repeating words and phrases, which is rare to find in Fanfiction authors. Keep up the good work and may Doitsu be with you!
carmineautumnmoon chapter 11 . 5/3/2016
Maybe an alter-ego? I'm not sure... Artemis is the name of the Greek goddess of the moon and the hunt, and she's sworn off boys... Aphrodite is the name of the Greek love goddess, isn't it? Maybe there's a link, but I'm not too sure.
Midnightsalem chapter 10 . 4/24/2016
For everyone: How do you feel knowing that there are people watching you everyday, judging your every action, shipping every ship?
The Impala has my fez chapter 9 . 4/18/2016
Nice chapter, I really enjoyed it. Please update soon!
Midnightsalem chapter 9 . 4/18/2016
OH FUCK THE FEELS! I'm guessing the horse face is AOT? And thanks!
writersoftheuniverse chapter 9 . 4/17/2016
Oh my god I think your chapter might have made me cry. I definitely know what it's like to be bullied
Guest chapter 8 . 1/31/2016
You said there were feels, but honestly Kiki is such an unlikable character to me that it just seemed irrelevant to even care about her crying.

But aside from that, I'll give a short, proper review. The story is very fast paced- almost too much so; it makes it veey difficult to really care or understand anything that's going on. I understand Hetalia episodes are short, but the 'episodes' here seem to be over after just a few words.

And also, the whole bit about the period seemed very offensive to me- like it was exaggerated to the point where you actually wantes to offend anyone with a vagina.
Midnightsalem chapter 8 . 1/28/2016
Well this chapter sums up how fucked the axis are with Kiki around, but HOLY SHIT JAPAN CAN FEEL! It's like all my birthdays at once.
KimiCapucciny chapter 8 . 1/26/2016
JapKi is my new ship aw yiiiiiiiiss! xD And she had her period? Poor Kiki! D: But most importantly poor Axis xP Loved it!
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