This was a very sad story. Although I'm not sure Cedric had a right to be so angry. Sure. Sofia used magic without him. BUT he was trying to steal her amulet in the episode. I really liked the way Cedfia shared a dream. Yen Sid was a clever idea. And I loved the ending.

I wouldn't have guessed Yen Sid, but good choice! Also, I just realized that I've read this before. I'm trying to figure out why only Cedric can understand Wormwood and not his parents. The ending was very sweet, and Sofia was super adorable, from bringing her pillow with her to answer the door, to wondering if she was dreaming when Cedric sat her on his lap, to dragging him to his workshop for lessons. Well done!

Super short and a little pointless. Sorry, but the animals didn't really contribute anything to the story. They just told us that Sofia is miserable, and we already knew that. Wormwood is at least doing something to help move things along. Not My favorite chapter. Still, I guess the animals being worried about Sofia was kinda sweet.

Aww, poor Sofia! Her happy dream was just destroyed. And Cedric, cheating. Dude, you can't be hugging her up in your dream and then ignoring her in real life. How can anyone stay mad at that adorable face?

Also not bad. The writing isn't quite as good as chapter one, leading me to believe you were rushing a bit. But, I like how this chapter played out. I still want to hug Sofia, and I still want to slap Cedric, but I'm much more interested in seeing these dreams they're having.

Hmm, not a bad first chapter. I still think Cedric is no position to be angry at someone he's be lying to and trying to steal from. But, I still want to see how this plays out. I felt so bad for Sofia. She's usually so good! But she does one bad thing and now even Cedric is mad at her! She needs a hug!

I liked the vision of Yen Sid :). Glad Cedfia made up, this was a cute story :)

Hopefully Sofia’s animal friends and Cedric’s parents can talk some sense into them.

That dream was so sweet. :)

Ugh! Cedric! Why are you being so stubborn!?

Oh, poor Sofia and Cedric

Lol, I feel bad for this. But the idea of Cedric crying over the amulet whilst eating jelly beans is heartbreakingly hilariously too me. Like, IDK, I don’t know whether to laugh or be like “Oh! Poor baby ” at the situation. Just so many conflicting emotions.

On a serious note though. It’s sad that this incident is causing such a riff between our friends. Especially with Cedric being tempted to go back to his old evil ways because of it :(. Hopefully they can make up soon.

Interesting story, he kept me with a lump in my throat, and on the verge of tears, poor Cedric hugged him

so wormwood only sticks around for entertainment?

Aw, what a nice ending. I was NOT expecting Yen Sid. lol Nice job! :)

Yen Sid! You got me good! Great story and I'm looking forward to the one shot.