FINALLY A GOOD CROSSOVER

Beautiful writing! What a plot twist that Alphonse was listening the whole time.

I'm a bit confused. it said that ed had his arm taken away agian. but now he has automail?

Did give up on this? If so let us know please

will you be continuing this or is it discontinued?

This is good - please update!

Hope you update soon!

I love this chapter. great job. I liked how Ed was all smart and that idiot wazlib. update soon?

oh my god this was the last chapter I read before now...
yay I've been looking for this forever.

oh my god this was the last chapter I read before now...
yay I've been looking for this forever.

Please update! I enjoy your story.

WHO ARE YA CALLING A HALF PINT PIPSKWEAK MIDGET?!
But srsly, good job.

cant wait for the next chapter! and uh, if i may... are you going to have students watch his examination? cause i read fanfics where they didnt and i really didnt see the point in actually including a whole fight scene if none of the students will see it. i hope you do. oh and if you could have more interactions with the students that would be great, its becoming a bit boring (and sad) that Ed doesnt interact with anyone at all. well either way, i bet you'll find a way to write a great chapter nevertheless.

I find two main flaws in this story so far.

1. Abhorrent overuse of profanity. I'm pretty sure Ed said "fuck" three times in one sentence. There's nothing inherently wrong with profanity, but that amount of excess is not only unnecessary, but doesn't fit Ed's character.

2. Confusing scene breaks I can't follow. Armstrong came out of nowhere when it seemed like Ed was going to be seemingly teaching an entirely new (old) subject.

OMG! Finally... This is so awesome! Everyone has gotta read it...
Its character development makes you really feel in touch with the characters. The sensation the characters give off are a bit different than the what I felt in the original plots. I feel Edward doesn't have enough of his more mature side showing in this Fanfic. However, it does give a nice refreshing feeling.
The plot so far has just engulfed my focus.
This writing style appeals to me the most of many others, excluding its lack of sensory description. I believe it could use more details on clothing, taste of food, smells, actions (although your description of action is quite advanced, if I do say so myself)...

Long story short: This is a frickin awesome crossover an every1 should read it! It's a refreshing, well written story and really appeals to my tastes. Sooooo yea, keep up the good work! ヾ(*ﾟ) BAIIII!

Alicia/Maya~