Obi-Wan should've lived to the end. He really should've.

Sadd..:(

Damn it why did it has to be angst now something entered my eye

I feel as if I've just ridden another emotional rollercoaster. Gosh, this story was just - GORGEOUS. And, my friend, even that is not enough to describe this wonderful, fantastic tale you've woven.

So, as promised, here is my written review. It's rather long, so I apologize. :)

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So at last, I have returned (from the beach after about six hours, four games of bowling, and ice cream! Man, it's been a good day!), and now I'm settled in with a glass of tea, my headphones, and your YouTube playlist. I have to tell you, my heart is racing with anticipation.

9K words!? You've outdone yourself.

Why am I now mad at the official for speaking harshly to Obi-Wan and Satine?

Oh, Anakin. Always so noisy. *shakes head* You probably scared the living daylights out of poor Kira!

So we've got people in two categories now - quiet and loud. I'm guessing Kira is quiet and Caleb is loud.

And enter Caleb. Definitely a loudMOUTH.

Yes, Kira is an M83 person. :)

So THAT'S what you meant when you were talking about hairbrushes. I like this development very much. :)

Uh-oh, camping trip. We'll see what happens. At least Kira should be happy since she likes forests. ;)

Okay, I know exactly what gave you the inspiration for Anakin's dialogue. The king of sass has returned! XD

Caleb, you dork. Streams are no friends of yours! XD

Obitine fluff! Yaaay!

How did you know that Kira likes Caleb's hands? I don't remember telling you this, but one of Kira's favorite physical aspects of Caleb is his hands. :)

Obi-Wan, what are you doing? Don't you DARE go over there!

Oh, great, Satine's following him. Nice move, Kryze. *facepalm*

GUNSHOTS!? WHAT HAPPENED TO OBI-WAN!? GOSH, TELL ME OBI-WAN'S OKAY!

SATINE! NOOOOOOOOOO!

Kriff.

Caroline, I hate you right now.

Oh, Kira, what are you doing!? Don't run away!

...ow. Just...poor Obi-Wan. Poor Kira. Ow.

Oh, Kira, is he adopting you!? :D

Photographs? Were you listening to Ed Sheeran?

Fandoms! (I have a hunch that Kira would like Captain America, too. :))

Awwwwww.

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So yeah. As you can see, I went through quite a few emotions during the course of this story.

Thank you so much for this wonderful masterpiece, my friend. It was everything I hoped it would be and more. (Is it okay if I wrote a few tie-in oneshots? I feel like I've come up with quite a few shenanigans for our modern-day crew. :))

Anyway, thank you so, so much. May the Force be with you always, Caroline! :)

awesome job! Loved Obi-Wan's relationship with Kira, and adored that you added Anakin. The camping tragedy I did not see coming, and was written very well.

Eeeeek! Thank you SO much for writing a Satine/Obi-Wan AU! I was fangirling from beginning to end. Anakin; of course he's adopted lol. I can hardly believe you killed Satine, but *sniffs* it must be so, I suppose. I just love family fics; they're just extra-sweet.

As far as a birthday present goes, this was really good. :) sheesh katierosefun, leave some talent for the rest of us.

Oh wow never before in my memory at least have I cried at a fic this one had me tearing up quite a bit this is probably the best oneshot I have ever read great job , you and MusicKeeper should team up and write a fic with Cadena and Kira and Caleb and Jim and obi wan and satine..of course though that's up to you and MusicKeeper. Lol and the feels when I saw Cadena hehe anyways better wrap this up so great job this was awesome XD

This actually made me tear up a little... just a little... It was really great:), it confused me a bit towards the end, but after i read it again I understood it perfectly. I'm a huge fan of all your work... please keep writing :)

I did a little squee thing, cried, and then another little squee. How can you manage to write such rollarcoasters?!

That was so sweet. And if MusicKeeper sees this, I hope she has a great birthday