Awww. Sorry about your friend. This is a beautiful tribute

LOL, love it!

Haha that was funny. I liked the conclusion very much.

Ha, this story is really fun :) I love the way you portrayed the girls, Flora using Bella's temper to wake everybody up, and their not even complaining, but rushing about enthusiastically because it was Valentine's day, to Bella's great confusion. Her reactions were spot-on, teddy bears are so not her style, haha. All of the girls turning on her in outrage when she dared to show disdain for the celebration was quite typical too, lol. And the teasing about Tom was quite priceless, with special irony for Flora being utterly oblivious about he and the Dark Lord being one and the same ;) Then Bella's state of nerves during the actual meeting made me giggle, as did the Dark Lord's sarcasm (and the hot chocolate detail ;)). Cool dialogue, and priceless bit of info about the actual Saint Valentine. That's the spirit, girl :D

It's a lovely story, and a great gift to your friend. RIP. *hugs*

very good fanfiction brilliant one-shot!

A great story honey.

I really enjoyed the story! It's written very well and you just managed to keep them in character but also making it simply adorable :)
I am very sorry about your friend and I am truly impressed by you dedicating this story to her. I just wanted to let you know that you are the kind of friend anyone can be very proud to have :)