Huh. It started strong, amazingly so.
It was personal and had immense potential.
You seemed to squeeze it down a bit with subsequent chapters, but still left a lot of potential.

As to Harry, the only take away that I was able to garner is that he is still a child, emotionally, but he's a also a vampire.

The epilogue felt like it was from an entirely different author, like a review of your work, or something you came back to after a length of time and were no longer invested in.

No real immersion, no genuine character involvement or attachment, just... 'and stuff happened, things have changed, probably somewhat for the better, maybe. The end.'

Not the expected direction, and with only one chapter left, a very confusing development, but still compelling.

If you can take this rather amazing tale and make it Harmony, I'll... I'll... well, I'll certainly favorite it, if it continues in this vein regardless!

WOW! Powerful stuff, well paced and compelling.
I'm excited for more :)

it was a nice story even if the ending seemed rushed, but it was a nice premise, it was well written, and was interesting on top. so i can only say it was nice to read it

I love this story, a little short but nice !

So I liked the story up until Draco was randomly included, it made no sense especially given the amount of time Harry and Selena had to bond.

great, thanks ;)

Update more chapters about this story,because it's the best,extra and the great story that I was reading about it,and I am also starting to love and to like reading to this story. So can you please write more chapters,because I want to know what happens in the next chapters about it. THANKS SO MUCH FOR WRITTEN TO THIS STORY,thanks so much about it.&&&£££%%%$$$

love this story

love it

Nice story.

Gods, this is so beautiful and heartbreaking. Love the way these two worlds so beautifully came together without illogical clashing.

Personally I would have had Michael turn me so I could be a Hybrid.

First chapter was good but the second and third were just stupid.