Huh, ok, that actually worked well.
Now, did you write more?
To the author page!

But first, thanks for the story. Short as it was, you delved deep into a solid backstory for them and I'm really hoping you built from there.

The Black Witch... I like it!
I'd love to see the outfit, does she have a cape? :D

Hmmm. Well, I don't know where you're going, but it's a very intriguing character story so far :)

Welp, never heard her called 'Iris' before, but I suppose it fits the flower theme, so why not :)

Heh, well, leaving Stane as a stain is a reasonable choice. Leaving him a drooling veggie is a decent alternative!

*blinks*
I don't exactly know what just happened, but it was Awesome! :D

Better English now. I have an English friend translating. Is the woman in question Ginny Weasley?

Finally learn English. Apparition is interesting. Much like Potter. Sorry if I have broken English.

This was good, but a bit on the short side...

I just reviewed this but realised I forgot to mention the thing I like the most. The iris and Hermione pairing is done so well. Normally I'm put off of harmony stories despite having shipped (after Luna and harry) it in the books and films because they make Hermione really annoying by making her so perfect yet you wrote Hermione really well and I loved this part of the story the most with both Hermione and iris reacting how I would have thought they would in canon.

A great story your a brilliant writer and I think I remember seeing a sequel on your profile so I'll check that out. I loved the Hermione and iris moments they were very cute.

The cheeky bastard. Great beginning. Now to see how the rest unfolds.

This gives me an idea for a story where Shield knew about magic and post Winter Soldier the leaked files shatter the Statute.

So cool...

Not what I was expecting. But I like it.

Good writing, great characterizations and interesting plot. I like it. For some reason, it is easier to picture Harry as Natasha/Iris than I thought it would be, which makes it even easier to appreciate.