It is by far the best fic i have read in ages. I was drawn in and captivated by how well you depicted each straw hat’s attitude towards the entity and the entity’s writing itself, i lowkey fell in love with Elycia despite her psychopathic nature and could somewhat relate to her. You truly are a talented writer and I look forward to more fics like that.

An admirer,

I definitely loved the spooky vibes, and the tensions were so high I couldn't stop reading! Thank you for writing such a good piece 3

Great story, man. Thanks for writing it.

I think its a great story. U must continue and add another chapter

Dude, this fic is absolutely awesome XD i got chills from beginning to end and just as compelling! It felt like I was reading an actual episode of One Piece! So great, loved it!

This was great, so entertaining to read and I love the whole idea of this story! The characters were well written, and I especially enjoyed Brook's dialogue.

Thank you for sharing!

*claps excitedly* Amazing job! It was such a thrilling adventure, I enjoyed it from start to finish o3o
At some points, I believed some of them would die and would start preparing myself like 'oh damn, here it goes', but then they didn't and I was sighing in relief before another scene like that came xD
I love your writing, keep up with the awesome job! :D

that was some good fic right there. and wow did sanji really need that hug. then again, so did everyone else.

Honestly, I've never been so tense reading a fic than I have now. Of course, I've read my share of depressing ones, full of DESPAIR and GLOOM and DEATH, but this had gotta be the only one I actually found myself wondering, "Oh my god, are they really gonna kill you?" for damn near every character involved. The way you built up every scene was utterly perfect. I have to say it was utterly satisfying to see every character get their moment (especially Brook, what with him being my favorite character, and the fact he rarely gets a nice serious bit in). Sanji and Luffy were awesome too. Good to see Sanji having some believable doubt, and Luffy being the determined badass he really is. The villain was believable and genuinely terrifying, if not with a slightly rushed backstory. My only minor qualm might be that I felt the ending was cut a bit short, though that ain't saying much, since it basically means I just want more of your sweet-ass work. Overall, I loved it. Good job, bud.

This was amazing, truly. A gem among OP fanfiction, it was surprisingly hard to find though, you should consider tuning it into a multi chaptered story, seeing such a long oneshot turns a lot of people off for whatever reason. I would go look at the filler arc if it ever came out and thats a lot considering I dont like the One Piece anime at all :) Truly a great ride.

What if Zoro hurt Luffy? O.o I want it... Toei needs to hit you up. Send them an email because One Piece will be needing PLENTY of filler arcs because the anime is getting WAY too close to the manga.

Whaaaat, but kung-fu dugongs are awesome :'(

Great nakama-ship story. Keep me on the edge of my sit. That one last touch was awesome. I'm always love Sanji and Robin's mature interactions. And their scene with Luffy in library was thrilling.

Awesome.

Keep it up. Wait for more filler arc liek this from you.
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Dude, this was frikkin amazing! XD Glad I found you off of Tumblr. XD

This is depressing but really good. Everyone is in character, even Luffy. I like that everyone had time to shine.

I haven’t read such a great fic in a long time.
I was really worried about Sanji when I noticed he was decided to kill himself, I stopped reading at that exact time because I had classes and I had to go, so I have been thinking the whole day that he would die since I couldn’t see a way out. Thankfully Luffy woke up. :)
The whole story was amazing and the haki part was really interesting, it wouldn’t have crossed my mind. If you get hired to write One Piece filler arcs warn me! ;D