Reviews for Visibility's Edge
Rookblonkorules chapter 1 . 11/18/2019
*casually deletes canon and replaces it with this*
I can't. My feels. Thank you so much for writing this!
LadyShada chapter 1 . 8/13/2019
Lovely fic. I adore the way you wrote each character, and I could visualize all of it effortlessly. Bravo.
Scholarly-Cimmerian chapter 1 . 10/13/2018
Poor Anakin. All that anxiety and fear, and yet once he came out and said it, Obi-Wan was willing to be perfectly reasonable. Yet another lesson in the importance of good communication.

Good work all around. I got something of a chuckle out of Obi-Wan's reaction to Anakin's confession, I must say. Just because I really like "Well, I can't say this wasn't a surprise."
Ghostwriter chapter 1 . 1/1/2018
Awesome work. I love it.
Betterways chapter 1 . 10/9/2017
I think a competent publicist could spin this so they end up the galaxy's ultimate power couple.
multyfangirl21 chapter 1 . 12/10/2016
I wish this went to the time that they start raising Luke and Leia.
ThunderSphinx chapter 1 . 12/8/2016
But what happens next? The Jedi? The Sith? The Republic, the Empire? I must know! :(

Can you please write a sequel please?
Guest chapter 1 . 4/12/2016
Adorable
Guest chapter 1 . 3/28/2016
Sweet
cari chapter 1 . 2/28/2016
I kinda wish this was more than a one-shot, cause the set up is perfect, between the desperation the situation is giving them to the glimmer of hope for the future they till have, I want more!
starcrushborealis chapter 1 . 2/25/2016
This was so genuinely heartfelt and perfectly written. Thank you for sharing this with everyone.
xXAngelic ScarsXx chapter 1 . 1/14/2016
I really enjoyed reading this. I assume you probably won't continue it, but I'd really be interested in seeing a few more chapters on this.
writeforeverforlife chapter 1 . 12/27/2015
i love it! now if only this were cannon...
JediGaladriel chapter 1 . 12/23/2015
You can't just leave it like this! Please please add more to this! Please! I've got to know what happens!
candyasmr chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
Fantastic work. It makes me wish so fiercely Anakin had actually reached out to Obi-Wan instead of fleeing to Palpatine's false hope. Everything would have been so intensely different then.
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