Reviews for The Concept of Love |
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Face Yourself chapter 3 . 7/22 Ooooh. That explains the quality thus far; the author doesn't speak English. Nobody would ever misuse the word 'female' like that if they did. XD I guess that gets you a little leeway. |
87stookymanoy chapter 1 . 6/4 Hrghdgfttyryjggdgghturren!g gftjthf |
look2019 chapter 14 . 11/28/2019 I liked the epilogue! |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 14 . 9/29/2019 Lol |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 13 . 9/16/2019 So it was just a dream? Aww man |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 12 . 9/16/2019 That gives a whole new meaning to 'Cat Fight' |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 11 . 9/16/2019 Both of you (Steven and Lapis) did, you both made a mistake. But Steven's with Pearl now. |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 10 . 9/16/2019 Lapis has a new label besides Lazuli and Ocean Gem. That Blue Whore |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 8 . 9/16/2019 WUT |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 6 . 9/16/2019 YEEES |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 5 . 9/16/2019 Lol |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 2 . 9/16/2019 WTF PEARL |
InuyashaFanGirl16 chapter 1 . 9/16/2019 EEEEEEE! |
Darfur Maxx chapter 14 . 7/27/2018 The story was kinda corny, the formatting of the dialogue is annoying to read through since new speakers don't start on a new sentence, yet often characters will have their dialogue divided so it looks like someone else is saying it even though it's from the same character. The ending was unexpectedly epic, and I think you have the chops from that one idea alone. Keep at it! |
Darky Universe chapter 14 . 12/6/2017 Best Steven x Lapis fanfiction I have ever read in my life |