Reviews for Himitsu no akumu
Mike Kromer chapter 5 . 9/15
Must have more asap. love it so far, keep it up. Can't wait to see what happens next. Does ichigo actually know all the girls want him but just ignores it/only has eyes for yurichi lol. You know the girl's mother wants him, maybe she does as well lol. If ichigo really wanted a harem, probably still obvious to all the girls wanting some attention from him lol. Just wonder if his animal instincts will force him to mate/heat thing lol. Ya yuzu has it bad for krig/mate she wants. Wonder if Karin already went and changed, or will start to change/puberty/growing up faze lol. Just wonder how she got weapons and ichigo looks like he doesn't care one bit about that. Did he train her in thg them himself? Definitely interesting.
VAANG69 chapter 5 . 7/12
esta bueno wey xfa continuala
Maxuos chapter 5 . 3/4/2018
I really love this story and i hope you can continue it in the near future, the idea is sonthing diferrent and incredible so i will hope for you return.
Tilty.bbb chapter 5 . 9/4/2017
Please continue this
Monster King chapter 5 . 6/3/2017
Great story I really liked it can't wait until the next update.
Ayla Kurosaki chapter 5 . 1/5/2017
I absolutly love this!
Please update soon!
noondark chapter 5 . 12/30/2016
Glad to see you have returned , and I a man looking forward to Yoruichi's reactions about Ichigo's new past.
8579 chapter 5 . 12/28/2016
It's so good to hear from you again. This chapter is short but it doesn't matter as long as you update. Hopefully it wouldn't be long until Ichigo able to see Yoruichi again. Ganbatte!
Infinite battle chapter 5 . 12/27/2016
Helsing Anderson or Helsing Ultimate Anderson?
hevenlydemonknight chapter 5 . 12/26/2016
Haha awesome
anoyak111 chapter 5 . 12/25/2016
Finally a new chapter been waiting for this the entire year also pretty good chapter update as fast you could
buterflypuss chapter 5 . 12/25/2016
good chap
Zanthraxone chapter 5 . 12/25/2016
Great chapter I'm glad to see your back. I'm curious to see what you have in store for Ichigo & Yoruichi in terms of what she will see in "The Matrix" Lol. I look forward to seeing more in the future and I hope you have a Merry Christmas.
cg037 chapter 4 . 10/8/2016
It's a good story, keep up with the good work.
SomethingAncient chapter 4 . 9/13/2016
Hello, the "anonymous guest" here. As for why I didn't log in... I don't exactly know but it's one of two things.
1) The website logged me off as I hit 'Post Review' and I never noticed (this has happened 3-4 times already from what I have caught).
2) Something happened to my phone and I decided not to use anything with a password until I could verify its integrity. I review as soon as I can so I don't forget things which is why I may have reviewed as a guest anyway.

This chapter was a good explanation as to why spiritual things could be restrained. However, either mentioning or foreshadowing the supernatural aspect of this organization a little earlier would have made things more believable at the time.

Simply having 'this is going to hurt you' with no 'we have the capabilities to harm spirits' makes it difficult to think that is the case. The communication device that is in Yoruichi's ear just "mimicked" her "energy" despite being explained that the AI only recognized it as a "unique energy".

This gives the impression that, despite being unable to properly identify what the energy is, it is still fully under the control of the technology... which doesn't make much sense. I hope you see where I was coming from.

On the physical hurting the spiritual: the fullbring arc explained how all objects have spirits and how fullbringers brought out the potential of said objects through their connection to those objects. Explosions and plasma are chemical reactions and not objects.

However, I'll give it to you with how inconsistent Kubo has been with his own rules when it comes to Bleach: especially the thousand year blood war arc. I mean, we did see Rukia phase through a wall which suggests that the physical doesn't have to affect soul reapers. And now just about every established 'law of spirits' has been broken... sigh. I feel like I've been misled by Kubo... or maybe Shounen Jump on this particular subject.

Anyway, on the technical side of things:
The punctuation could use improvement throughout. There are commas instead of periods and semicolons while colons are nonexistent.

When Bront was protecting Melanie you used the word rabbit, did you mean rabid?

And what is a "belt fed"? So far it looks like three different things.

Anyway, nice job. Have a good week and God bless,
SomethingAncient
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