i love this so much, you do really well grammatically and it flows really well. :)

oh my goodness i love it!

You say that the prophecy is about Percy but a "Solo demigod" could be just about anybody in the world. How did Chiron just magically infer that the prophecy was about Percy?

I am definitely hooked on this one! Keep it coming!

I seriously thought I was going to break down after will read the results.i thought Percy might kill him or kill himself

Awesome!

Hatts: That was seriously amazing, well done for finally updating. Who knew you had it in you! ;)
-LastDanceLilli

Amazing chapter! Your writing abilities are wonderful.

It's good you didn't drag it out. Most stories do that.

Keep up the good work!

Awesome!

BEAUTIFUL INCREDIBLE I LOVE IT!
Such a simple but amazing and so well written plot idea, and your words just flow so easily. Please keep going! *throws love and marshmallows at Hattie*

Yay, so there is a prophecy thought there would be.

Awesome I thought the Golden Fleece was at camp half blood

Please, please don't abandon your story. So many people come up with fantastic first chapters and abandon the story after that.

Excellent work. The flow of the sentences feels good on the tongue, which is always a plus point. Your grammar, I didn't find anything wrong with. Everything else is great. Your storyline and plot is unique. You bring justice to the story.

Keep up the good work, don't be discouraged if you don't get many reviews.

Tip: If you have long paragraphs, you can't split it up more finely. And whenever a new character speaks, a new paragraph should be formed.

Luv,
MeridaAtMidnight

Ohhhhh cliffhanger... Is the Golden Fleece still at camp half blood or not, can't wait to find out. Keep writing.

Great so far tho I wonder where u r going as the they already have the fleece so that's not going to be a problem so what is?