This was hysterical! You nailed the characters, and the dialogue was great. I laughed until I cried reading the exchange between Mike, Bobby and Alex. Thanks for a great story and a fun time.

Great story! I really enjoyed it! Awesome!

I really loved this story. Having Mike trying to find out what happened is so mean. Keep up the Fabulous writing.

Loved it write more soon please.

pretty funny! mike is a good friend, even when he's spying on them.

I loved every sentence! I was as curious as Logan. I love that Logan gave Winters a bill! And my favorite part was when Logan couldn't pinpoint the truth. : ) Great story.

Thanks for the story. Really needed a distraction from real life. Love CI: Bobby and Alex ending up together is the only thing that made sense of the whole series. Especially explains why Eames stuck by Bobby all of those years. Wish the actors/writers of show would have ended with them being in a romantic relationship.

Awwww. Love this!

Wow, I had been very happy because it was one of his stories and because the header did not appear to be complete. But was rather full. I'm just with their long histories of longing. Anyway, it was fun. Ho, alas, our heroes are aging, and in the case of boys, things are getting even more difficult, huh? Alex was nutsedge, but Bobby and Mike hit it straight because both are two guys. The phrase 'I prefer to keep my pieces in order, even though I do not use them much more' is hilarious. And these Major Case detectives, huh? So many crimes to solve and they wasting time with some pimps! Ô race! For me Mike, and especially Bobby, will always be beautiful, no matter their age. Thanks for writing. More please !

Funny story and good writing. Now I have to gripe about something. I don't know if anyone else will agree with me. But first thanks for posting the whole story. I just finished reading 11 chapters of a story posted in 2009. I'm working up to present day postings. I get to chapter 11 and I'm left hanging in the air on a suspense story and there's no end. I don't know how it ends. I'd like to suggest that people don't post stories unless they are complete. I don't know how many I have read like that and I will never read another story posted by those authors. And that's a shame because some of them are good.

Excellent story with some delightful comedic touches. Great read, look forward to more.

great story, glad you are back.

A new story. Yay! And while it's a shame Bobby is injured, the premise is too intriguing!

So funny! They were much kinder to Logan than I would have been. Thanks for writing!

Fun, lovely story! I wish this would be a script for another episode.