nice, nice, very nice. I wish to read the continuation of this story.

Aw, that was cute! I love Nagi Omi stories and its so hard to find good ones on this site!

~Der Traumer

GAAH! *gwompattack*

- This is my second favorite pairing in the Weiss world, nanodaa! And it's so cute...and so true...!

Now...we just need to work on Omi-kun to stop being that evil Mamoru...*growlglare at ebil man*

_ Keep up the great work, nanodaa! *offt*

I don't know what else to say except that (grins):Typical first time in love behaviour. I wonder how this is going to blossom...

Like all of your other fics, that I have read, I loved it!

Like all of your other fics, that I have read, I loved it!

aww! this was a really sweet story _ im glad i found it... i've loved WK for awhile but I have a hard time finding *good* WK fics.. this is definitely a good one _ you may say you know nuts about what you're writing, but i think you did a great job. i love how Nagi is so cold.. well, cool.. through the story... how you don't just randomly have him completely change his personality just because he meets Omi. it makes this story even better than it otherwise would have been. great job! i'm definitely going to keep this fic bookmarked so i can read it again sometime _V have you written how Nagi takes it? i'll have to look... if not, i hope you do sometime! i really really enjoyed this story and setting _ -Ais

Argh, the best stories are always one-shots.

Like this one.

I wish you wrote more!

I thought this was an uber-cute story. Loved the ending.

Isn't it funny how you can write a terrible story, and other people think it's wonderful? I guess the Self is the hardest critic.

I didn't know you wrote WK fics! ::squeals:: Coolies! -

I lovelovelove your writing style! Your fics are so well written...I fall in love with them at the first sentence. It amazes how you have the ability to grab the readers' attention and hold it throughout the whole fic...that's really hard to do. Omi/Nagi is my favorite pairing (besides Youji/Aya -) so I'm glad to read a fic with it! ::glomps::

~StrawberryPocky

That was AWESOME! So sweet! .

Aww real cutie pie story. Short but sweet-loved Omi's gushing. Very cute, and I never considered him a gush-er before, thanx. Overall, I really enjoyed it.

This was a wonderfully written story. I do hope you continue to write for this show and this pairing. It's my favorite. And it would be a shame to waste your talents, though I do suspect you write for other series as well. I just think you capture their personalities well in this. I found it a heart warming look at how Nagi thinks and feels, and I have to agree. The two youngest assassins do indeed remind me of angels... lord I am so hopeless, first Quatre, then Omi and Nagi and well... Let's just say the list goes on... Oh, I am sorry, I forgot to mention, exactly what it was I liked about your fic, I mean other than the obvious. I really enjoyed your descriptive language. It reached out to me, it was such a beautiful and lonely landscape. But isn't that really the city streets... Nagi would know. If you never write another fic featuring this couple, I thank you now for the contribution you did make. I very much enjoyed it.

WOW! that soooo goooooood! you really shouldn't end it here...my poor mind that is addicted to fanfiction really needs to read more of this. and since i am an increative review writer...this is it!

good job again!