I don't think this was necessarily rushed. Sure, fast-paced, but South Park is fast-paced, right? Anyway I enjoyed this story and good job! :D

This story is such a refresher for me. it almost feels like a parody of all those very angsty-outted stories that clutters this website. The characters are treated fairly, and I'm glad to see fitting reactions. The U.S. is a much more accepting country, and I'm relieved to see fanfiction writers are finally starting to realize this.

Although my only issue is that Kyle's speech about the cycle of revenge sounds almost exactly like something from a Naruto episode. But it is still good nonetheless.

THAT BITCH.

That bitch will pay. I will see to it.

And finally, a valid and honest reason for Cartman to be...well, pleasant for once! XD

Another masterpiece from the brilliant mind of Jish, everyone! Well done. :)

I was curious when the squad was in the cafeteria "kyle" stan said softly what was he gonna say but I really love this story and the life lesson at the end this inspired me to write my own fabric.

Excellent chapter; excellent story. Wonderful job and very complete and substantial ending that tied all the knots together. Awesome job and a pleasure to read. It was far lighter and more contained than the dark and gritty Legacy Scars, but I kind of like that: It's refreshing. Really good job. Amen

Damn, Token, you got busted! This is what happens when your mind is in the wrong place. And Bebe, revenge is not always best idea, especially through another person.

Cartman, good for you for seeing what friendship can do! Also, I'm glad Kyle could be forgiving to something so... I can't think of the word for it. Er, inconsiderate? Heinous? I don't know, but something along those lines.

Seriously though, this fic was awesome! I wish I had more to say, but it was well-written and I always appreciate a story written in present tense. It's a nice surprise for me, but I digress.

Interesting idea, goddamnit Clyde. I really hope he broke something.

Whoa. Great chapter. Congrats on completing year one of college. It's a great feeling, huh? This chapter was epic. I love all the thought that went into the tech and process of what they were doing. It makes it feel like a Batman-level interception. Seriously, great and gripping chapter. Something's not quite right with Cartman, but I love the gang working together as true friends. Can't wait to see the conclusion when it comes, or at least the story as it unfolds

Don't worry man, this didn't feel rushed at all! This was a great and entertaining chapter, and I frankly liked the length of it (bad thought, bad thought).

What is up with Cartman, anyway? I'm fond of the change, but it seems... odd for the fat boy (not complaining, though).

Anyway, keep up the good work!

Great chapter. Shit just got real. I really wonder who did it. It's cool that Cartman is finally an official good guy. Awesome story

Adventure Time with Kyle and the Crew! I don't know why I just did that, but the time has come to avenge Kyle's outing!

10/10

Welcome back. College is winding down for me, too. Good chapter and can't wait for more. Best of luck with everything

Well, at least Sheila was fine with Kyle being gay. To be honest, I'm glad you're making Cartman into a good guy; it's not as common as one would think (well at least for me), but I'm excited to see where this will lead us!

Oh I love these kinds of stories! Please update soon, I really want to know how this talk with Kyle's mom goes!