Spot on, really like it. Keep it up

Excellent writing and excellent prequel. Characterization was spot on and story very interesting. I sequel to this is desired!

Really like the story so far. Ready for more

Wow! Very interesting! You should really continue this, Kagami, it's way too intriguing to leave it a one shot! Come on! Write, write, write, I'm dying hear to find out how exactly is he planning on bringing her back and what will happen next! :) Good job! :)

lovely. i would like to know hos plans

Hahahaha fast forwarding through their 'intimate scene' can't say I blame you. ;))

I do like it... In a way, she didn't want to leave Ares, powerful memories there. But she couldn't continue to fight for him...she had such a dilemma, the poor girl.

And Ares, Xena was always different and I liked that he was not so happy with his priest for what he said to his number one girl. His plans for Xena, didn't quite work out but it's not like he really cared that she foiled them. That's what he loves about her, she is so good.