I've been saving this story for when I had the time to read it all in one go. I am currently at university, studying for a degree in Creative & Professional Writing so it could be said that I have the chops to offer a little criticism. You are probably aware of the occasional typo lurking in a couple of places, but they are barely noticeable because this is such an amazing piece of work of which you should be justifiably proud! (And yes, I used the same word twice in one sentence!)

I think this is one of the best, alien/predator stories. Most of the ones I have read are ok. I love stories that have a plot to them and not let's fill in the holes with sex. If the readers don't like this story. Then stop reading then. Please keep writing.

This story fucking rocks keep it up

This is a cool ass concept haven’t seen anything similar to the extent of using animal dna tons of yautja injecting their blood and what not

What was SPC even complaining about in the first place what word, Underestimation is an excellent read! Good on you for putting SPC in their place. (If you don’t like it then don’t read it simple!)

I'm really glad you don't listen to jerks like that because your story is great and I can't wait for an update! Also the way you handled that was pretty badass!

sorry you get crap like that

Using the same word twice in a sentence is redundant, as you've already used it once, there's no need for it twice, now using it trice in a sentence is an anathema of the writers world and would be the equal of Writers Suicide- That means that you know so little words to use, that if it was a professional looking at it, they'd discard it and send you back to School. It lacks creativity that you cannot use more words, and most of all, it reeks of Laziness, and the worst thing a writer can express is that.
Do you not want people to feel engaged, when they read your work? I feel bored when I see the same word twice. Diversity but consistency.
This is not a Good start on a story.

I'm honestly just happy when I see an update. Good luck with your finals!

Take your time honey and good luck with you finals.

ill humbly await for the next chapter. good luck on ur finals

More please?

I love this story

I am so glad to finally You added a chapter. I love your story. I will

I love this story