I know that you probably stoped writting, but maybe you could start a new fanfic with mirrors edge and oc may be like in crysis effect.

Really wish you would come back and finish this story dude. I hope you’re alright.

Pls update this fic is great!

I enjoyed reading this, although I must admit that I prefer the newer Doomguy.

I like John/Yang/Blake.

ima just say yang

Thanks for writing this fic, it was a massive inspiration for me to write my own DOOM/RWBY story. It would have been awesome if it was continued. :)

John/Ruby . . . Like seriously I may usually if not always ship Pyrrha/Ruby but this situation makes me ship John/Ruby.

No cliche one liners!
Especially not that one.

Doom marine should be slightly less chatty IMO.
Like the Master Chief.

Cool is generally not saying much.
Badass is looking good while not saying much at all.

Actions say more than words.

noice.

ruby goes to weiss only maybe penny

ugggggggggggggggggggghhhhhhhhhhhh another amazing fic fades into the void

I think it's safe to say that this fanfic is dead. It'll be missed :(

THATS IT ENOUGH WAITING!
Whoever is good at writing stories please takeover this cool story because I don't think he's gonna be writing anytime soon.

It's magazine not clip, and bullet would be the correct terminology because slugs are used as another form of ammunition in shotguns but otherwise this is a great story.