Reviews for Fortune Said It Should Be You
Treehouse31 chapter 1 . 8/26/2015
"They didn't need to do more tonight. They'd raised the bar for their next daredevil act of emotional sharing and would no doubt rise to that new challenge in the future."

Favorite lines - Very nice story of two people who recognize their falling in love, but know going slowly is the best way to go.

Thanks so much for this!
jakela chapter 1 . 3/22/2015
Tender and sweet and a perfect illustration of the push and pull between the two of them, how they care so much for each other, that they can overcome their fears and hesitation to truly reach out, and share a little bit more each time, as they inch across that high wire of intimacy and emotion.

Great job!
J2CaReese chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
Very cute fics. You to write perfect intimacy between John and Joss. They are not yet a couple but they are perfectly comfortable with each other. They are perfect. thank you
literaturechick chapter 1 . 3/21/2015
I love it! It's beautiful. This is so them in every way important.
Thanks!
Lady Sundiver chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
Lovely, just lovely!

These two intensely private people need time together. What better way to spend a quiet night, whether it be Valentine's or a Friday?

Thanks for a story without numbers, guns or mayhem. :-)!
oaktreeX chapter 1 . 3/20/2015
Aww..I got the warm and fuzzies. Great story!
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 3/19/2015
Aww, better late than never. This was so sweet.
carolinagirl919 chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
This was definitely worth the wait. I like how a nice quiet night shared between the two of them was where a lot of things were said, while there was plenty left unsaid. I'd actually like to see this in a sort of series; a progression of conversations between these two with the occasional stops, starts, and stumbles. You could really pull that off, you know. :)
blacktop chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
This is absolutely lovely, delicious in its details (caramel strands curling from John's mouth, yes!) and searingly true in its emotions. I love the sleepy kiss at the end, so powerful. Great job!
Bklyngrl chapter 1 . 3/18/2015
"And Fortune said it shou'd be you." Oh this was just lovely. I love the way John and Joss see each other, the way they talk and interact with one another. You capture them so well. Joss asked and John answered, all he wants is her. Just let go Joss... you're safe with John. Thank you for this.
Kayla2 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
This was certainly worth the wait. So adorable. Loved it.
SWWoman chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
What a great portrait of two people falling in love. This felt very right, very them!
Devereauxpoi chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
I loved all of this! There's nothing better than John and Joss hanging out and doing normal stuff. Just talking, having a beer and learning some more about each other. I really enjoyed all the stories they shared and how they "raised the bar" for next time. This was so good!
PiscesChikk chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
This was exactly what I wanted, and it was so worth the wait. I always wanted a moment in time for them, one where they just talked and spent time together, simply because we didn't get it on the show. From the moment Reese called her in Liberty and expressed how he missed sitting down and talking with her I had a mighty need for a moment like this. And I am very happy with it.

I loved the use of language, the imagery. I could see the laugh lines by his eyes when he smiled, see her looking at the line in his nose, watch her rub her scar awkwardly and him touching her hand. I love that there was a stirring of emotion that each of them acknowledged silently. I love that something was simmering between them but both of them showed restrained in pushing it further. That's exactly how it was on the show. And I have been in my Careese feels entirely too much today, but this story just made me cry, man. It just made me miss them all the more.

I love that she asked him why he came and I love the fact that he just wanted to be with her. For him it was always that simple. He never could stay away from her and I feel like you captured he he felt at home around her.

I literally said Yes! out loud when I saw what DVD he brought over. I mean my favourite movie too? How much more perfect does John Reese want to get? He is such a romantic and I could definitely see him wanting to share that with her.

And then the two of them falling asleep next to each other, him kissing her softly goodnight? I was done. I've read this twice already. I feel like I wanna cry again. Thanks so much for this. It was late, but it was a great V'Day and B'day gift for me.

Thanks again, girl.
wolfmusic218 chapter 1 . 3/17/2015
Lawd have mercy, woman...that was wonderful! So intimate and funny and, in a way, sexy. The things you came up with them to talk about were perfect! Loved every little detail. My fluffy little heart is happy. :)