Reviews for As N Approaches Infinity
Alternative Ice chapter 83 . 7/24
Took a couple days to binge this, but it was worth it.
This is a really good story you've got so far.
I really like seeing the other character perspectives, especially ones that don't get as many like Renji, Uryu and Rukia.
I also like reading their opinions on the Madoka characters, especially Madoka herself.
I hope that you bring some of the Oriko Magica girls into this fic eventually. Maybe not this timeline, but a future one.
Keep up the good work.
PatchworkChimera chapter 83 . 7/20
you're such a good author, i reread this masterpiece every few months. I can't believe this is free to read
LukeSky001 chapter 83 . 7/3
Holy shit. We are STILL in the first loop. And there are apparently 54 more of these...

Where do you find the motivation?
J flood chapter 83 . 6/23
hey I haven't seen you update in a while you okay? getting worried
fanficobsessed15 chapter 79 . 6/7
So, this is actually a review of chapter 83 because I only reread the newest chapter, but apparently I already reviewed it once (same with the other chapters between here and 83), so...

I wonder if Sayaka was on Rainbow Road. Don't worry Sayaka, I keep falling off that track too.
Jokes aside, having Sayaka realize how things are from Homura's perspective is always really cathartic. You could make the next chapter just that, but with Mami, Kyouko and Madoka, and I wouldn't complain. Hell, even Madoka's parents could be interesting.

As another Reviewer said, Madoka's dream seemed a lot like a Shinigami's inner world. Though I thought it was Madokami the first time I read it. So now I keep imagining Madoka going "Ascend, Madokami!" and turning into a concept. Her Bankai would just rewrite existence so her opponent never existed.

I love how Tatsuya is just exploding with happiness the entire time. At least he's still having a good time.

I'm guessing the last two lines are supposed to reference Homura? I feel like we're approaching the point of too much symbolism. I know the PMMM anime did it too but in text you can't have anything else happening at the same time, each word is distinct, so it's harder to miss and feels more like it's distracting from the story. We already had Sayaka's Mario Kart loop reference, we don't need the cutlery sound clock sound yet. Unless you make it some sort of running joke that the Mitakihara girls start equating everything to Homura.
"Guys I just saw a circle. If you follow the black line, you go forever, but always arrive at the same point. Just like Hom..."
"Holy shit would you give it a rest already! And screw you for calling my life a circle!"
The Quiller chapter 1 . 6/1
Good lord, this is one of the best crossovers I've ever read. Everyone is so beautifully in character and you have utterly mastered the skill of interweaving the lore of both settings to create something even more epic.

I'll be waiting on tetherhooks to see where you take this incredible tale.
kalandrawow chapter 76 . 5/29
"NO! NO FUN!" Kyoko yelled. "REMEMBER TO BE SAD THAT I'M DEAD!"

I have read this line almost a dozen times now from rereads and it still gives me belly laughs.
V01dSw0rd chapter 81 . 5/8
MadokaHomura: YinYang.
V01dSw0rd chapter 54 . 5/5
Ichigo and Homura commiserating about Cazh Soul...
V01dSw0rd chapter 42 . 5/3
Hope to BLEACH out the despair...
I see what you did there!
Sage of Wind Dragons chapter 83 . 5/2
good fun! all stressed and messy... like the holding it over on that kid for generation after generation of work. if metaphysically the soul condenses after all the timeline and he gets the collective stress.. well.
messy!

banter is always fun as well.
also parents and kid reaking out!
Ran taking care of Captains new Love interest is fun! (I half joke I promise)
but aww poor kiddies.
so... parents now having LONG talks should be fun, and dealing with Madoka needing a a Zaraki solution should be fun. the SUPER empathy! lots of problems there.
but everyone mostly on the same board! all the good fun! like only the ghost spirit thing is up in the air but that's meh.
still all talk HONESTLY how fun!
PatchworkChimera chapter 83 . 5/2
you are such a good writer like deadass this is better than some published books I've read. thanks for the chapter
Guest chapter 83 . 4/29
So Madoka has the potential of her becoming a Hogyoku.
DareusX chapter 83 . 4/29
Well that was a rollercoaster of emotions
NoNameAvailable Bis chapter 83 . 4/29
Glad to have you back!

And so, we continue unfolding the whole time travel reveal. So, Sayaka, that feeling you have of wanting to kick past you's ass? Hold on to that. And meanwhile, Madoka... i really seem like a zanpakuto-like entity has established contact with her, which... shouldn't be possible at this point, but then again, Madoka has shown a willingness to break all rules when the chips are down. The more dark interpretation is that her witch is the on attempting contact, but the entity seemed too benevolent for that. Also, she apparently has memories of all the timelines stored away - wonder if it's just her or if the other girls have a similar potential, they just haven't been able to explore it so far.

Yukio showing up was certainly a surprise, I really didn't expect to see a fullbringer coming back to the story. Well, I imagine Urahara can use all the help he can get, and Yukio's personal brand of bullshit could certainly be useful - i mean right now I'm not sure how, but I'm certain you have spent a lot more time thinking about it, so I'm rather curious. At this point, I wonder if anything significant will happen in this timeline apart from Walpurgisnacht showing up. I mean, the group could still spend the rest of the time just sitting down and processing things (and presumably writing diaries like crazy), thre's still a lot of characters we didn't get an insight on how they took The Reveal (Kyoko and Mami are the obvious ones, but I'm pretty curious about Madoka's parents), all in all, I feel like the gang could spend the rest of the month inside Urahara's hou-

Oh my god. They're self-confining. There is no escape!
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