| Reviews for Fallen on Snow |
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Guest chapter 3 . 8/11 Please don't leave Loki here in the dark. Sasha £££ |
a-ufo-party chapter 3 . 12/25/2016 PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE CONTINUE! I just found this story & it's wonderful & heartbreaking & you can't just leave it there! |
orangefingers chapter 3 . 6/13/2016 THIS IS SO FREAKIN' GOOD! I was absorbed in every chapter, but as soon as I got to the end of chapter three, I became devastated because there are only three chapters so far! No! Anyway, you write so well, though I don't worry about grammar and such much as long as the basics are down, since plots and such are more important to me when reading...haha. Yeah. So I fell in love with this story, and I am hoping you will be updating soon! I'll keep my eyes out! You're doing an awesome job, by the way! It's intriguing, deep, and realistic. Keep it up! |
cubedcoffeecake chapter 3 . 10/12/2015 Woah. Okay. Plot: Amazing. I have NEVER thought of this scenario before. And you are writing Loki in his depression really accurately too. Sadly, I'd know. It's really hard to keep in character but make them suicidal and depressed, but you're doing a super job of it. So, yeah. Please update soon! I really like Sifki stuff, and depressing stuff, and this is the best of both worlds. |
Ruby of Raven chapter 3 . 10/6/2015 Love it! I want to see if Loki ever comes out of his depression. Update soon! |
Hekka chapter 3 . 9/28/2015 I wonder if Frigga and Odin decides to return Casket to Laufey (with some magic geas or contract, guaranteeing consequences in case of military aggression by Jotnar). To save the world (yes Thor died, but before he attacked the other Realm and caused an indeterminate number of victims). Especially now that they can not risk even the slightest chance of Loki find out the truth of his origin) |
Artemis chapter 3 . 6/6/2015 Poor Loki, he has such a long way to go yet till he feels better. But he has Frigga and Sif, they won't give up on him! |
PeaceHeather chapter 3 . 6/5/2015 ...is it bad that this well of black despair is something I can look at and say, "Sounds familiar?" But it does. I get like that sometimes. You portray it well. |
abyphile chapter 3 . 6/5/2015 You really captured Loki's despair and prompted tears on my part. I wonder how you will make him come back from this. He's at that point where he desperately needs confirmation of love and acceptance, but now he can never get that from Thor. That nightmare set him back. |
thephoenixandthedragon4ever chapter 3 . 6/5/2015 Loki is am absolute complete mess. I hope you are sincere that it will get better because it all seems so hopeless. Loki is surrounded by Asguardian citizens who want Thor and rather him dead. |
Asa-kuuki chapter 2 . 5/20/2015 Wow. How great and sad at the same time. I hope for more! |
natalie rushman chapter 2 . 5/19/2015 I really love the way you characterized Fardral! This is a good story, I was really glad to see that you updated! |
queenfire chapter 2 . 5/16/2015 Great, as always ) |
Artemis1000 chapter 2 . 5/16/2015 I love this story! |
Derama17 chapter 2 . 5/16/2015 Very very good, thanks |