| Reviews for Naruto Midnight Saiyan |
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   Noctus Of The Thousand Blades chapter 10 . 5/12 this.. i have no words. it was like a train wreck, it starts out interesting, then spirals into disaster. and the worst part is you cant look away. the power levels are all over the place. naruto and Kazen are far too OP even for the Dragon Ball universe. the story is... well, a mess to be honest. all in all this started out interesting, and then spiraled into a wish fulfilment fantasy. there is no real sense of conflict. you created a pair of mary sues to whom nothing is impossible. and that is BORING! then there is the harems, which make ZERO sense. you just slapped a bunch of fights together and BARELY added any story to connect them. sorry if that sounds harsh, but this fic is a mess. so i am outta here. dont worry, i wont be back. i have officially lost all interest in this fic, so this is the first and ONLY Review you get from me on this fic. maybe i will encounter and read something else you have written sometime in the future. but it wont be soon. so until then? Peace out, and thank you for your time. |
| nikki nein chapter 1 . 9/8/2019 what is naruto tfs vegeta |
| HyperA2019 chapter 2 . 7/17/2019 I am looking forward to chapter 11 and I hope Naruto gains ability to unlock Super Saiyan god mode. |
| Monster King chapter 10 . 5/18/2019 Great job |
| Guest chapter 2 . 5/16/2019 There is no way you posted this and thought it was okay |
| Mike Kinkaid chapter 1 . 4/22/2019 That has got to be the most confusing and terribly written story summary I have ever had the misfortune of reading. |
| god of all chapter 10 . 4/8/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| XenoLucifer chapter 2 . 4/8/2019 Soooo, *sigh*. Why is it that everyone making Naruto/Dragon Ball crossovers are incapable of basic grammar and story telling? It's ridiculous. |
| XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Run on* god darnit autocorrect. |
| XenoLucifer chapter 1 . 4/8/2019 Too many fun on sentences. |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 10 . 4/7/2019 Cool chapter continue please. |
| ShiniKami999 chapter 4 . 4/5/2019 The fact Kazan got Anko makes me angry |
| god of all chapter 9 . 4/3/2019 Great chapter and story so far please continue this story soon. |
| Guest chapter 3 . 4/2/2019 Ahhh when your evil by voltaire. I listen to it alot |
| StrongGuy159 chapter 9 . 4/1/2019 Awesome story continue please. |
