Reviews for The Missing Piece
AoHazuki chapter 1 . 7/31/2016
waaahhh! this was so nice ;) Thank you for writing this. I wish you good luck for your future stories. Ganbare~
Lady Desdemona Hawkings chapter 1 . 12/22/2015
why do i feel like this story is gonna turn into angst real soon? great job by the way! would love to read the continuation!
Mozu The Mochi chapter 1 . 4/4/2015
You killed me, you cheeky author. Sadist. This. You make me have an addiction. To a drug called Akakuro. I was only starting to forget this ship but now... Kyaaaa
gone deleted killed account chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
Such a beautiful story. I love this so much. Just amazing.
ShinseiShinwa chapter 1 . 3/9/2015
Holy mother of-For the first part of this story, It felt like I was thrown into lava or something omg so hot. Then after a while, it became nice and soothing to read. Overall really cute and...overwhelming, I hope you keep writing more!
silver woman chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
1. the sex is perfect! so hot!
2. is it ok if you could italize or do something different if there is a flashback? its kinda confusing the plot.
3. i saw a kitagawa? who is that?
4. akashi and kuroko had a dog named sangou? or is it still nigou?

overall the story is good... some tweeks of spelling and a little bit more editing would make it perfect. and the smut scene? is already perfect!
Guest chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
Haha, I loved reading this fic! It was so sweet!

By the way, I was wondering, who is Kitagawa? I mean, when Akashi proposed to Kuroko, it was Kitagawa who reacted: 'Kitagawa brought his hand to his mouth.'
Rinfantasy chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
I love it! really! so sweet! especially the sentence " if I'm with you, I won't mind eating cat food for the rest of my life" and the joke with Aomine is gold!
however after " Kuroko Tetsuya merry me" you wrote Kitagawa instead of Kuroko
ScarletAkiChin chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
Sweet yet hot. Love it.
Anon chapter 1 . 3/8/2015
Nice story! I love it!