Hmm i did see that you wrote(OLD). I wanted to read this first then go read the new one! I'm going to go read it now! I'm so excited to see what's going to happen.. i love this story.

I was anxious the whole time while i was reading. Ah it's good they are back together! And Natsu is alright...mostly. and! he wanted to hug her! Yesss Nalu!

Wha? Huh? Why are you doing this to me... TT i hope they are going to be alright.. i'm so so worried... Omg Happy ... ugh i'm not crying... and if Natsu is getting stronger in his human form while weaker in raven form that means trouble... he could die... TT

Omg i was freaking out! What the heck? I was not excepting that! When i said that i thought Natsu was going to get kidnapped i was kidding! I'm so worried! Omg Natsu was bleeding...

He'd bed sleeping a lot lately...hmmm...did Kyouka do something to him when she was 'translating' his waves? Will they kidnap him or something...
Omg ! I was so worried they are going to get cought! Oh i'm so happy they escaped!

Ok i obviously don't trust Kyouka... i'm worried something bad will happen .. .if there is black and white witches then is there other kind of witches? Hmm

Great chapter! Wow Natsu! Great way to threaten people xD. I can already tell that i will love the idea of black/white witch!

When she said 'you got hair now' i thought he become human and that he used to be bald when he is human, it was funny :D

why was Jude bieng so cruel to her?! She is still a kid! And that 'Imma poop on you' wow Natsu, wow xD. omg Happy thought that Natsu was food! Poor Natsu he will get eaten xD

Great chapter! The story is very interesting!

Man this sure is interesting, and just when I found a good read ;v;
Well I'm excited for the new chapters I guess, so keep up the great work!

This is beautiful and I love it. A lot of interesting things here. Is there a reason why Lucy's flow of magic is weird. I get the feeling Layla wasn't an ordinary witch. Like is it possible that she's a mix or something different. This is exciting. I love the flow of everything!

"Ima poop on you" made me laugh :D, I also like the idea of Natsu being a bird then transforming into a human at night. I wonder how that will play out when he is older :o

this story is so gorgeous im crying I kinda want to know what these fairy tail divisions are but i feel like they're just going to make my head spin but all the more I want to know! I'm also excited for more Natsu/Lucy/Happy moments

I love this fanfic so much! I can't wait to read more!