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Mid Level Fighter chapter 1 . 5/13/2018 I really like this idea, but notice the March 2015 date and got sad. I've read all but the newest book for SAO (much better than the show), and the four in the Progressive flashback story. Hopefully this gets some attention soon, as I would love to see how the girls handle the bosses, deaths, and even the possibility of being forced to kill people themselves. Laughing Coffin could be done as the main villains of RWBY, with Poh (their leader, for those who never read the books) could be either Cinder, or Salem as a twist. |
JadedSilverLining chapter 1 . 2/28/2017 I hate to see this die after ONE chapter. It looked promising. |
ARTiculate3267 chapter 1 . 12/11/2016 Oh, I am so excited for this! I love the idea of crossing RWBY and Sword Art Online together, since they suite each other with the weaponry, sci-fy fantasy and somewhat advance technology. It's too bad they can't use their semblances or original weapons in the game. It'd be nice to see the girls kick just as much ass as they do in Remnant. I wonder if you'll be adding some of the other RWBY character in the game like Team JNPR or Team SSSN? Maybe Team CFVY? You said you're open to pairings, so I wanted to say I hope you add some BlackSun (Sun x Blake) or Ice Planet (Neptune x Weiss) (Sorry BumbleBee, LadyBug, and CheckMate shippers, I don't have anything against them, so please don't kill me.). If you introduced Kirito, I don't think you'd have to move it to the respective crossover section. Anyway, this is an amazing and interesting start! I hope you update soon! |
Rachelandes chapter 1 . 11/22/2016 So, hi! It looks like 30 reviews on a story is pretty normal for you, but I still hope you read this one and it encourages you. I completely agree that sao rwby crossovers need to be far more common, but I love yours. Please continue this story and let's us get to know your interpretation of the characters! I can't wait to read interactions and see how the stories and characters change because of their new circumstances. Please keep with this old fic, for your readers sake if nothing else. So far it's been well written and imaginative, please don't make that stop now. Happy writing! |
fireflame789 chapter 1 . 7/25/2016 Ok, I'm actually hyped to see this come to life. This has a lot of potential, and in all honesty, I want kirito to meet up with Ruby. Keep this story going! |
EvaShinobiKaiserKnight chapter 1 . 3/26/2016 Hey I think you should have Team RWBY pair up with someone, doesn't have to be a cannon character can even be an oc just feel it should be someone they can truly love instead of making them lesbians. |
shadowstar618 chapter 1 . 3/16/2016 When are the actual characters gonna show upppppp |
tricksterlinx chapter 1 . 2/22/2016 I'm still waiting for the next chapter ~T_T~ |
SkyDD chapter 1 . 1/25/2016 hope you continue someday with this fic... because nobody seems to update the SAO/RWBY crossovers and this one is the one that has me wanting to read more |
me chapter 1 . 12/2/2015 well, just some things i would like you to include in later chapters, Have a Weiss vs Asuna part somewhere in there Include kirito, but have them only interact like once every 3 or 4 chapters, if you include them too much it would just add to the harem. We don't want a harem, oh and how about having them first notice him because of him being in an article about being a solo beater and encountering him later. Have them engage at some point with the other side characters but maybe only once every 5 or 6 chapters and have kirito sometimes join them on quests to help and have fun. thanks if you bothered reading this. |
EvilStorm101 chapter 1 . 11/18/2015 Love the story and can't wait for you to continue it |
OrangeGalen chapter 1 . 11/12/2015 I really do want to see this as a continuing story. What's great is that it has all of RWBY and not just Ruby, which makes it different than the others. It'd be funny if Torchwick and Neo somehow got in and started running an orange guild (not Laughing Coffin though), and Ruby got pulled into Lisbeth's blacksmithing from time to time because I can totally see that happening. I don't think any other Beacon students should be in this and focus on RWBY and Kirito/Asuna. |
NocturnalWarrior chapter 1 . 7/29/2015 Going with FlameDragon14 says, if you keep it an AU, you can make some of the bosses and monsters sort of Grimm-based considering this SAO is in Remnent and not necessarily in Japan or Earth. A lot of creative license to floor bosses not in the show. (And it turns out Ruby gets a unique skill called "Scythe Wielding". Either that or she uses axes that look similar to Crescent Rose.) |
Treant Balewood chapter 1 . 6/20/2015 Enjoyed the way this one started it has potential, I'll be keeping an eye out incase it comes off hiatus. Thanks for Writing! |
Zebralord23 chapter 1 . 6/12/2015 I have a feeling this dark haired boy that bumped into Ruby is Kirito... Please correct me if i am wrong, it is just seems that he is. |