I'm sad you never finished this I love the fanfic

I love this! Hope you decide to write more )

Followed!

Please continue this, the potential is great, and anything involving Neo opening up is interesting to me. This is great writing so far.

im laughing so hard right now omg lmao

Ooooh dear...the irony is so very thick, and the potential for trainwreck levels of emotional devastation are off the charts. Poor Ruby; I have no idea how this will turn out, but it's not looking good...

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Well then. That was a dangerous last line...

This fanfic combines wonderful fluff with the mysteriousness of an intriguing plot. I'm hooked!

Oh my...

I'm definitely interested in seeing how far Neo and Cinder are willing to take this, and what they plan to do next.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Very very well written and I love the pacing

Great chapter, very inserting back story for cinder.

Always happy to see an update. :)

So Cinder really is just stringing Ruby along, albeit with some real affection involved. Not surprising, though a little disappointing. I really wish we knew what her plan was; that way, we could know just how truly 'evil' she is or isn't.

The look into her mind was quite interesting. I actually did enjoy this chapter a lot. My disappointment is more on behalf of Ruby than anything you've done.

Take care, good luck, and I look forward to your next update.

Cimder x Ruby... wuttttttttttttt...

"smeared lip gloss" GIT REKT.

Interesting... the plot thickens...