Reviews for Car Washes Are Tickle Traps
Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2019
This is absolutely adorable in everyway possible! I love how you put a soft side into the usually stoic Optimus Prime; it makes you truly see all the sides this character has, unlike some of the stories I've read, which only make him seem as emotional as a statue(not hating! I liked their stories, I just wish they had put in some more emotion). Anyways, I truly did love this story, keep up the good work!
Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 10/25/2016
Very fun. Thanks for letting him relax.
Julien Caeg chapter 1 . 4/26/2016
Car wash are tickle traps? That was the first time I have ever heard of it and a very good job about this story. SUPER CUTE! Love it
BookieAngel chapter 1 . 6/5/2015
Brilliant! :)
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015
LOLZ Dats cute x3
MissFeral chapter 1 . 4/2/2015
What a sweet story! I'm glad Mrs. Darby wasn't mad at the kids for the water fight. It's awesome when parents have a good sense of humor like that. I really enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work! :)
streetspectre.dcon chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
That was the cutest story, I have ever read it made me laugh and I had fun reading it. keep up the good work. :-)
CaptainBlue56 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015
WOW! that was cool!
newbienovelistRD chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Optimus ticklish?! Wow! Learn something new every day! :D
ninja-warrior101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Omg. That was adorable! The Optimus Prime, ticklish. Perfect.
Sparkling Lover chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
So adorable!
guestsurprise chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Too adorable!
kikigraysonwest chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
that was so cute and funny, it loved it
BBPRIMEFAN101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015
Very cute story!