| Reviews for Car Washes Are Tickle Traps |
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Guest chapter 1 . 7/1/2019 This is absolutely adorable in everyway possible! I love how you put a soft side into the usually stoic Optimus Prime; it makes you truly see all the sides this character has, unlike some of the stories I've read, which only make him seem as emotional as a statue(not hating! I liked their stories, I just wish they had put in some more emotion). Anyways, I truly did love this story, keep up the good work! |
Unseen Watcher chapter 1 . 10/25/2016 Very fun. Thanks for letting him relax. |
Julien Caeg chapter 1 . 4/26/2016 Car wash are tickle traps? That was the first time I have ever heard of it and a very good job about this story. SUPER CUTE! Love it |
BookieAngel chapter 1 . 6/5/2015 Brilliant! :) |
Guest chapter 1 . 4/1/2015 LOLZ Dats cute x3 |
MissFeral chapter 1 . 4/2/2015 What a sweet story! I'm glad Mrs. Darby wasn't mad at the kids for the water fight. It's awesome when parents have a good sense of humor like that. I really enjoy your stories. Keep up the good work! :) |
streetspectre.dcon chapter 1 . 2/27/2015 That was the cutest story, I have ever read it made me laugh and I had fun reading it. keep up the good work. :-) |
CaptainBlue56 chapter 1 . 2/27/2015 WOW! that was cool! |
newbienovelistRD chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Optimus ticklish?! Wow! Learn something new every day! :D |
ninja-warrior101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Omg. That was adorable! The Optimus Prime, ticklish. Perfect. |
Sparkling Lover chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 So adorable! |
guestsurprise chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Too adorable! |
kikigraysonwest chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 that was so cute and funny, it loved it |
BBPRIMEFAN101 chapter 1 . 2/26/2015 Very cute story! |