An awesome story! Thank you for this great Vehicon and human friendship! Raoul and Steve were awesome - the ending was great. :D I enjoyed reading this, and I wish you the best of luck on your writing!

It doesn't say Completed at top. Does that mean there'll be another chapter? :) This is awesome! I love this story! I can't wait for your other stories to be updated too.

Cash is out. Peace!

I just started reading this and I think it is absolutely amazing! Their personalities, their thoughts, and everything about them is so fascinating! How old is Raoul again? He seemed like an adult in he beginning but then childish towards the present time. (Just asking :)

I have read other stories about the vehicons and how they are soulless and miserable but this certainly changes my view on them now.
Keep going, this is great!

I hope he goes back for Raoul. It would stick if he just left him to fend for himself. Besides, the kid did try to warn him...sorta.

Cash is out, peace!

This is awesome! Update soon!

Go Steve! Go! Sweet! Please continue this story? I really want to know what happens next! Is this like right after the last episode? Does Steve meet the Autobots? What happens?!

Cash is out, peace!

You've got a good start, here. I like the idea. Should be interesting to see what you do with it!

Great chapter! Keep writing. :)

Normally I'm not fond of stories where the Vehicons are the main characters, but this story is actually more interesting then I had expected, so I'm definitely going to be reading this story more often. I was hoping that you'd have updated one of your other stories by now, but as long as you have a good reason for taking so long with them, then I'll be perfectly fine with waiting for however long you need to get them updated. As for this story, yet another awesome addition; you're just full of these story-ideas aren't you, and that's perfectly okay. If you ever need any help with anything, then please don't be afraid to send me a message, and I hope that you have amazing luck with this and all your other stories.

Sincerely, The Prime Writer.

P.S., who's that Raoul person seen up on the description? I never heard of that guy before and I'd like to know some more about him.

This is really interesting. I haven't read a story line like this before and I can't wait to see what happens next!

Oooh, this looks promising! So our fave Vehicon, Steve, went out by his lonesome self into our big, bad world and have to befriend an organic native? All for the sake of a friend? All soooo like him! v Also, you've added Raoul into the mix as the local he befriends, nice! Definitely wanna see an update for this. Keep up the good work