Good start. Plot line very good, and suspenseful.

I hope Lisbon is okay! Couldn't bare it if she got hurt!

Great update. Can't wait to know what is going on with Lisbon. Hope she's ok. Nice!

'determined' not 'determent'

Ooooooh can't wait for the next chapter :)

ANXIOUS! WHERE IS THIS LEADING? Totally love it but AAAAHHHH. I always hated that Tommy Volker (love Cusick but hate Volker) ... please don't leave us hanging for too long my dear.

Valker for sure looks like a guy who would want to take revenge. I hope they will be safe ;)

oh no...poor Jane...thanks for a great story.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so glad you decided to write a story with volker vs lisbon. It's awesome to see her against her enemy! Love Jane, Lisbon and Michelle I can't wait to see what happens next! Please upload asap.

VOLKER? NO THAT GUY NEEDS TO GOOOOO AWAY!

Also, totally love that the baby is named Michelle, that's my headcanon of what they named her!

Great beginning! UDS!

Interesting story really Valker was always bad guy number 2, after red John, I mean even Lazarus wasn't so much creepy for me. So it will be interesting to see what he's planning or not planning. And Jane's family I can't wait for some mommy/daddy time with little Michelle ;)

Eek! Tommy Volker (I absolutely love Henry Ian Cusick)! This sound promising! Keep 'em coming.

Uh...oh...Volker, the best villain imo apart from RJ. I'm hooked!

good start .looking forward to more .thanks .