Hey, Pi! Stopping by to drop off a review on behalf of the Reviewathon over at Caesar’s Palace (stop in sometime, all fandoms welcome – and I could use a fellow J/Cer ;)

I had the sneaking suspicion that this was about real coffee (after seven years of Neelix’s attempts at ridiculous substitutes!) and I was right; it’s so her to force herself not to just chug it down in five seconds but to savor every bit of sensation and just let the caffeine take over her senses lol. And of course he watches her – and loves every second of her delight, no doubt.

[“Better than sex.”] – LMAO. I know she’s baiting him and he know she’s baiting him but I still snickered pretty hard at this comment. It’s such a hilarious and yet simple way to show they are together both for the savvy like me and for others who may not know them as well (because I often recommend stuff to fandom-blind friends). His response is priceless as well and I’m sure both of them enjoyed attempting to one-up last night too ;)

Concrit: there were a few commas missing in important places. I can PM those if you like. Just lemme know.

Great little ficlet :) cya over at VAMB!

Nice! I like how she said the coffee was better than sex!

Same as reading this story, when I think about it.

HAHA! Too cute!

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eitcha! cafezinho bom!