I love that last line, made me laugh XD

I loved it. Is this story complete?

Dani

Ooh, that was feelsy and h/c and I loved it. You can NOT beat a good h/c in my book. It is my favorite of all categories. Well done. Too bad he didn't get the ring but he went through enough. 10/10

a good story, thank you for sharing this with us all. I am glad I found it

A nicely thought out tribute to the hobbit in a dwarven world. As Bilbo would feel insolated from the rest of the company due to race and the difference in mannerisms I found your idea of an acceptance story to be quite pleasing. Now that the hobbit had shown his quality to the others he was allowed the gratitude and companionship he was needing. Well written and a comforting read for a late night relaxation as I have used it. Loved the Thorin not letting Dori lecture Bilbo for his actions line as I could so get a mental picture of that. ;)

The beginning was confusing. Did they jump after Bilbo or something? Did Golmn even enter the picture?

Good

Good work. Poor Bilbo

Yo!

Oh my! What a good thinking! I like the way how you wrote this story and most of it: the moment between Thorin and Bilbo!

See ya!

Dawwwww! Too cute! :3 Yea, it would have worked out a lot better if the dwarves had accepted Bilbo sooner, but really Gandalf just kind of dropped him in their laps so what were they to think? Very sweet though, poor Bilbo. XD

I like this; I wish Thorin ad the other dwarves had done so in cannon, but their friendship in The Hobbit is a grand thing too!