| Reviews for Dancing Around It |
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DancingInTheDark85 chapter 1 . 11/9/2017 Very sugary sweet but exactly what I needed tonight. Thank you. |
Rania760 chapter 1 . 9/7/2017 Moving Valentine Day for both. And what a kis! |
louvreangel chapter 1 . 6/22/2016 So beautiful and heart-melting! Love it x |
Kiki chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Well wouldn't you know: Teddy Pedendergass' s Love TKO when I started readimg this fic. |
J2CaReese chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Excellent, wonderful and very original Careese for Valentine's Day. You are perfectly traced the evolution of the wonderful love story of our Prefer couple. I loved the countdown of their delicate relationship until Valentine's Day. John is a true romantic and made this day a real fireworks. Joss had the most beautiful declaration of love. I love them |
literaturechick chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Love the emotional feels and vivid visual. You painted a lovely view into their relationship, thoughts, motivation, eventual coming together. Beautiful. Thanks. |
oaktreeX chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Awesome story! Love it! |
jakela chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 Beautiful visuals and loved how our practical Joss decided to take a chance on something totally unpractical - and totally wonderful! |
Darkhero35 chapter 1 . 2/21/2015 This was such a wonderful story you shared with us. Hugs. I already read it twice and i still get goose bumps, because it's so touching...sigh! I loved how they "danced around it". It was so Joss and John, sigh, i love them. And let me tell you this: Your writing gets even better and better with every new story you wrote. Keep on writing, because i love your stories :-) |
Guest chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 I was so moved by this, I tried to do the previous review on the cell phone half asleep. Having Joss and John accept that they love and are equally loved 8398in return, matters more than anything. I apologize for any misspellings in my previous post. I will read this over and over again often. . |
ReadtoRelax chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Amazing story about John forcing Joss' hand to open up to her true feelings. |
odalys-ortiz chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Better late than never. This was so sweet. I especially loved the part when John revealed the piece of her journal that he took Wonderful story |
Chellero chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Oh man. I just loved this. Loved Carter's thoughts. How she'd been ready to let him in that night but after the shooting, all the doubts and fears had time to creep back in. How she was scared to love someone who could be taken from her so easily due to his self-imposed duty. "He gave her life." Gah! Loved how you described them stealing glances, the tension building. Louboutins? Yeah, he had her at that. LOL Their dancing was so sweet and I loved that moment in the alcove. I couldn't believe that woman had the strength not to kiss that man, though. I was like, who is this alien woman with this strange Reese-Be-Gone sprayed on her? He'd have had my behind...*clears throat* Sorry. LOL Anyway, I loved how we found out at the end that he'd found her journal entry and that explained his making the first, very confident move by asking her out and trying to plant one on her. "I love him." "I'm scared to lose him." I mean, just rip my heart out. "You're missing a key piece of information...he loves me too." I lay there slain after I read that. Slain. What a kiss, though. Mmm. And "I'm great at other things too that you'll be adding eventually." He's such a cocky bastard. I love it, though. This was lovely, lady! |
carolinagirl919 chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 This was a very romantic piece that was beautifully told. thank you for finally posting this. :) |
crypticnotions chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 Man, this was so very good. The tenderness, the respect, the simmering love. I loved that it started out with them doing something as mundane as cleaning. I love that John wasn't immediately great at dancing. I love the little things you infused this fic with. And Joss certainly does love him if she let him get her hair wet. I hope he went home and helped her comb it. But this was lovely. What a great fic. |